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Will fell on the ground.
"How the heck?" He asked, amazed more at the beauty of the meadow then how they got there.
His faced dropped the confused look, and smiled.
He looked around, just astounded.
"It's amazing." He said, breathless.


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(Fictional plant. That's nice.)

"Yeah."
He looked over Carmine.
Apparently Will had, 'undressed.' He examined his torn jeans, and his blank tee-shirt, then went over to look at Carmine.
"Am, I, missing something here? We were in an elevator, next here." He pointed out in the vast area.


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(Sorry I meant under dressed, Stupid auto correct. And oh, okay.)

"Yeah, I'm fine." He blurted out.
"But, next time warn me when you, "teleport" me somewhere." He said with a soft tone.
He stood up, wanting to get a better view of the place.


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(It's okay, everyone asks questions:)
(Carmine's in his little get out with "short shorts" and yet Will in tattered jeans. It's kind of a girl thing:)

"Thanks." he muttered.
Will still wasn't sure what to think of Carmine. Either slightly weird or how he was actually kinda cute.
"Why?" He asked out of no where. Will had so many questions for Carmine. He just didn't know how to ask them all.


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(Lol:)

"Why did you teleport me here?" He asked, still not completely calm.
He didn't sit down, instead he stood in front on Carmine, his hands on his hips like a girl.


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(Okay. And bubble butt. Really?)

"No." he rushed the words out. He didn't want to leave. He was just curious. He looked away from Carmine, avoiding his face. He looked up at the clouds, still standing.
"Thanks." He whispered but loud enough to hear.


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(You're so weird:)

"For. For bringing me here. It's very, pretty." he said. He looked at Carmine and smiled.


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(Lol.:)

"What will your little friends think?" He asked, confused yet again.
"Will they be mad? Or do they know you can teleport?"
His face was grew a puzzled expression.


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"Tired?" He asked.
He still stood but he walked towards Carmine.
He examined him.


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"Dizzy now eh." He said, not really a question.
He wandered off a little ways, walking down the hillside.
He looked around, still amazed at the little place.


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Will walked off. He spotted a patch of dead grass a little ways.
He went to examine it.
(I don't know what to with Will.)


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(Well, um. How 'bout, nah that would be stupid. Well, I've got nothing.)


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(Lol, calm. Think calmly. I don't exactly remember what I was thinking. But perhaps Carmine flashes or, teleports back? Or something happens to Will?)


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(He falls down some weird hole that's covered by pretty flowers :p Haha, idk. I guess that'd work.)


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(Okay, Well, um I'll try.)

He looked down. The patch seemed different. But he kept walking.
Next thing, it all went dark and Will got the sensation of falling.


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Will fell to the ground, slightly phased by the fall. He got up, dusting his hands off on his pants.
"Carmine!" He yelled.
He couldn't see anything. It was too dark.


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Will heard a noise, and shivered.
"Carmine?" He asked softly.


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Seeing that his attempt to call for Carmine didn't work, he decided to use his amazing powers. (:P) He strained to hear Carmine's thoughts, but nothing returned to him. He walked forward, and still nothing. There had to be some fort of force field to where Will wasn't able to hear thoughts.


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(Lol, okay:)
(That's cool, I didn't know that:)

He frowned to himself. He always heard thoughts, anywhere, anytime. He was worried.
Where the heck am I? He thought to himself. He still wandered around a bit. He was determined to find Carmine and get out of where ever he was.


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"Carmine!" He figured he'd yell again. It was better than nothing.
He kept walking forward, well he thought forward. He stopped and fell to the ground when he ran into something.
He was unconscious.


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(Lol, I just made up the dark hole. Thought I'd make up a twist. Want it to lead to a civilization of some sort?)

Will heard the scream. It was faint, since he was already out. But it was enough to wake him. He felt Carmine's pain, which was good for Will. It meant he was near. He strained again, trying to listen to Carmine's thoughts. He got a slight reply, but just his whimpering from the pain. However, it was just enough noise to help Will find him.
"I'm coming Carmine!" He yelled as loud as possible.


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(Okay, well Will can kinda turn on and off his mind reading abilities. Before, He turned it off, not wanting to invade privacy. However now he finds it necessary. He doesn't really like having his powers So, yeah.)

Will tried to strain his eyes open. Failure. He couldn't see a thing. He kept walking though."Carmine! You out there?" He yelled. He picked up speed and started running.
He smelt blood. Not sure who's blood, but it was blood. Then it struck him.
Shit.It's Carmine. I'm such and idiot. Stupid hole, stupid me! He hit is head while he was running which caused him to trip over something. He used his hand to get up. Then he realized,
"Carmine,Carmine you okay?" He was trying to hear his thoughts, but his crying drowned them out.


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(It's okay. Questions are cool:)

He felt for Carmine's hand.
"Can you feel that? I'm squeezing your hand." Panic took over Will.
Thought he was a God? God's aren't allowed to die. I won't allow it. He thought to himself.


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"Dammit. No Carmine, stay with me." He pleaded. At this point he didn't know what to do. He couldn't teleport, like Carmine could.
"Please." He whispered now. "Come on." He nudged Carmine.


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"No." Will felt tears flowing from his eyes. He never really liked Carmine like that way, but seeing him dying in front of him, it changed his feelings. (Going all girly with the emotions:)
Will smelt the blood pouring from Carmine's side. He took off his shirt, and held it against Carmine. He tried to put pressure on it without hurting Carmine.


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(Lol, okay.)
(I'm stealing Will back:)
Will looked at Carmine. He couldn't see, but he felt the wound healing.
"Carmine?" He asked breathlessly.


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( :P )

"Please. Come on Carmine, Please." He whispered to Carmine. He nudged his shoulder slightly.
"Please." He begged.


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Will felt a sigh of relief pulse through him. "Carmine, I'm right here." He held his hand.


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(Bite Marks?)

"Yeah I'm fine." He said.
"But don't worry about me. Are you okay, Carmine?" he breathed.


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(No. But okay. I'll just pretend Will feels pain, he just doesn't want Carmine to know.)

"Here." He said as he helped to prop Carmine up.


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(Oh okay. I guess I missed it, but I see it now:)

"How the hell do we get out of here." He whispered under his breath. He propped Carmine up, and tried to hold him up.


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Great He thought to himself.
"So, now what? Are we stuck here?" He asked, panic throughout his voice.


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"Hey, don't worry. I'll get us out of here, I promise." He said, just hoping to himself that he could deliverer his promise.


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He held Carmine by his arms and waist.
Now, how do we get out of here? He asked thought to himself.
"You're sure you can't teleport?" He asked Carmine, trying to hide the worried tone in his voice.


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"It's okay." He said with no emotion.
"We'll get out of here." He said again.
How? He begged almost through his thoughts even though it wouldn't work. Will's thoughts were interrupted with another thought.
"Carmine, hear that?" He asked scared now. Someone was around them, and he could hear their thoughts.


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"Thoughts." He said scared.
He strained to hear. Words were not spoken, it was more of muttering, trying to stay hidden.
"Thoughts that aren't ours." Will said, as he held onto Carmine.


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"I hear someones thoughts other than yours." Will said, not knowing how to tell Carmine about his "abilities".
He didn't reach out for Carmine, instead he stood up.


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"Yes." He answered. He turned back around to help Carmine up.
"Sorry, I didn't say, say anything before." He frowned even though he couldn't see it.


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Will frowned. Apparently he shouldn't have said anything.
"Don't worry, I've only snooped a few times, meaning just this time." He said.
"But I've heard quite a lot." He blushed inside and out.


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"Yeah." He said, following after Carmine.
"Glad you feel better, about it." He said from behind Carmine, smiling. He'd have fun with this now.


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(You said he walked down the room? Wait, aren't they still in that hole thingy? Oh I'm confused now.)

"Yeah, I don't hear them anymore." He said, forgetting about Carmine, turned around and strained to hear.
"They're gone." Will said, scared.


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(I'm not that bright, gotta give me a second to understand. :P And okay.)

"Yeah. I guess I didn't notice when we started talking louder. Must have drowned out the thoughts." He sensed his Panic.


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( :P )

"Shh." He said as tried to concentrate on hearing.


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He listened as soft sounds registered. He walked towards the thoughts. They got louder as he inched in forward.
"I hear them again." He whispered


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He listened, and the thoughts started to silence.
"It's as if they know I can hear them." He said softly to himself.


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(Okay, so I looked up Carmine's character to see his powers. I'm a bit confused. Is there anything he could really do at this point?)

Will tuned out Carmine's thoughts in order to hear the others. He heard faint talking, almost like arguing.
"They're fighting." Will said to Carmine.


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(Ah, okay. Echolocation, sure :)

The thoughts got louder. Eventually one thought asked Will a question. Or maybe it wasn't for Will.
I hear someone. It paused, Who's out there!? it shouted.
"Carmine, stop." Will stopped at his heels.


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Will listened harder. The thoughts moved closer, and there were more than two.
"There's about 10, wait no 20, thoughts." He whispered to Carmine.


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"Right in front of us." He managed to say.


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Will stayed silent. He also got prepared. He listened closely. He heard thoughts, and then, if he was seeing correctly, a few little girls emerged.
(I'm gonna make it creepy :P)
Will was confused on how he could see them, but then he looked closer and noticed a radiant veil of light shimmering around each girl.


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