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Hey I am New and I wanted to test my Stories out on people XD

Okay!! Welcome to our group. :D You can just post your stories here (chapter by chapter kind of things or give us the link.) :)

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Here is one story its a bit rough around the edges :D ....

Looking Shifty Are We?

Ok so give me any criticisms or likes or anything really :D

Hey I want to write something people to will enjoy like short stories and I have ideas block if thats even a thing :P So I was wondering if someone could give me like a idea so Eg.

Fantasy or Normal: Fantasy
About: Vamp and Human or Vamp and Werewolf
Story line: Arranged Marriage :D

Luna ran through the forest at a great speed, forcing her body to keep her pace up or even go faster, her muscles pumping, sweat seeping into her mud soaked clothing, as her feet hit the rotting foliage beneath her, her heart racing like a humming bird as her mind whirled from one thought to the next. Everything seemed to be crashing down around her.

Her body shook from the cold, yet her body felt so hot, the blood pounding in her ears as she frantically looked around, for someone. Anyone. She had to be fast, faster than the people after her. If she wasn't it would be her next. Next on their Black list, in fact the last one.

1 Month earlier...

Luna walked along the cobbled pathway as she headed for Blackburn forest, her one inch boots clicking against the stone path with a steady rythm, as droplets of rain lazily dripped from the sky from time to time, until the drops got more frequent. She stopped in her tracks and quickly rummanged through her bag, fishing out her umbrella, popping it open, realising one of the spines were broken.
She sighed and kept going, picking up her pace, the smell in the air getting denser, knowing the rain would plumet down to the ground harder than when it first started and drench her school books.

She found it hard to believe that in 2 months time she would soon be graduating a school she once thought she would never get to go to, but after many days of pleading and puppy dog eyes she fianlly twisted her fathers arm to let her go.
She had always wanted to go to a normal school when she was younger, watching the kids in her little town playing, running around, laughing and having fun. She was jealous of their freedom, getting to soak up the knowledge of all varieties, getting to meet new and exotic people.
She finally got home and shook the water off of her,rapidly shaking the water off her now broken umbrella. She placed her umbrella down by the door to dry and took her boots off, placing them on the shoe rack that was near the front door. "I'm home!" She called happily, having had a pleasant day at school today as she took her leather jacket off and hung it up in the peg.

"Oh good sweet heart, I was worried you'd get caught in the rain." Her mother said, looking her over, realising she was still wet but only damp, not soaked. "So how was school." She said as she went into the kitchen, getting a flowery mug out of the cupboard and putting it on the counter as she put coco powder in the mug.

Luna smiled. "It was great, I learnt about The Titanic, The World War, I got to learn about the human body and now know a bit more french and the day was a breeze, no fuss or hassel." She said meaning her hunger. She hadn't eaten any meat in a couple of days and her family were having problems catching any game.

(( This is rough, just the beginning, not sure if it will work. Please tell me what you think.))