future authors discussion

Here's the link to the story I'm writing now. Please give an honest review, not just "I liked it" please. Thank you!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

-Dylan

I took it off of goodreads.

y?

Well, I want it to be published and I thought if it's on the internet than publishers might not want it. Was I wrong?

no but i never got a chance to read it but im sure its good

yep. You can post it for feedback and then take it off when your actually ready to send it to publishers.