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ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
Ok, i got 2 or 3 but i need your opinnion on them, mabye how to improve them.

plot twist no.1:

after a week agents will come and take each of the kids to a testing room. Robots attack the kid that is in the testing room. The testing room has no walls, just one way- mirrores for walls where the agent can look in and observe. The robots attack, not kill. The kids eaither use their powers or the get beaten up. They go through this once a week until they reveal their ppowers. Once they reaveal their powers they are oput in a different dorm room than the ones they started of in so they won't tell the other kids what happenes and the kids who don't reveal their powers get their memories re-wiped so they won't tell either or they will not start a rebelion etc.


plot twist 2: a kid, my kid, logan, number......146 or something i forget, gets found and rachel flies to get him butu he has nocked down 10 agents and the 5 that came with rachel. She tasers him and brings him back to the base, the thing is, his memories weren't wiped and he starts a rebellion, he quickely is put in a testing room but he refuses to reveal his power (he knows his power) and he uses his karate skills (he is a black belt) and he uses the robot's elecrisity to shock the room's lock. He escapes to the other testing rooms and releases them, he knows he can't release them all so he geos with just 5 or so. But then.....:


Plot twist 3 (this is the biggest soo far):

A girkl stops him just outside the base (you can only leave via helicopter) she has a brainwashing bug on her forehead. Logan and the others soon discover that she can conrol all the elements and she knows EVERYTHING about them. Her name is Jade. She encloses them in walls of concreate and knocks them out with lack of air. They are soon taken to the base's high securety prisons.



yeah...waddya think?


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Matthew (phoebus) | 57 comments Mod
we can do all three O.o


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
Matthew ~Insanity is a Virtue~ :P wrote: "we can do all three O.o"

oh, we are, but i am just asking what you think of them, how can they be improved?


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Matthew (phoebus) | 57 comments Mod
She encloses them in walls of concreate and knocks them out with lack of air. They are soon taken to the base's high securety prisons.

She as in Jade...?


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
Matthew ~Insanity is a Virtue~ :P wrote: "She encloses them in walls of concreate and knocks them out with lack of air. They are soon taken to the base's high securety prisons.

She as in Jade...?"


yep


message 6: by Matthew, Disciplinary Control or Head of Security (last edited Dec 23, 2011 07:58PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 57 comments Mod
They are soon taken to the base's high securety prisons.

then what does that mean....?


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
that there is also a prision for the bad kids where they get punished


message 8: by Matthew, Disciplinary Control or Head of Security (last edited Dec 23, 2011 08:02PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 57 comments Mod
Who is they if Jade killed "them"


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
Matthew ~Insanity is a Virtue~ :P wrote: "Who is they if Jade killed "them""

she didn't, just made them go unconshes


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Matthew (phoebus) | 57 comments Mod
K, but who is being taken to high security base


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 145 comments Mod
Matthew ~Insanity is a Virtue~ :P wrote: "K, but who is being taken to high security base"

(idk yet)


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