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message 1: by MollyRena (new)

MollyRena start


message 2: by Mary (new)

Mary luna stops at the edge of the water.


message 3: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments spike and Missy walking toward her


message 4: by Mary (new)

Mary luna waits for them


message 5: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments they stop nxt her


message 6: by Mary (new)

Mary " spike if it seems familar what is it that seems familar" luan asks


message 7: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "the build and the people it self seem familiar to me" he told her
missy was standing close to him


message 8: by Mary (new)

Mary " do youe rember anyone?" luna asks


message 9: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "no i dont" he told her


message 10: by Mary (new)

Mary (gtg)

" me and the other gril missy met have been here our whole lives " she syas


message 11: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments (ok seee you tommorw)
"really" he said look at her


message 12: by Mary (new)

Mary " yeah.. " luna says looking away. " all ive knwon is this stupid place and its rules" she syas


message 13: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments spike look at the water
"right, i wish i could member thing" he told her.
missy sat down


message 14: by Mary (new)

Mary " if you forgot maybe it was something abd that happened" she syas


message 15: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "you are right it could be something bad" spike said


message 16: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments it was silence
it got cold out and missy put her knee up to herchest
"luna their got to be a reason wh we are all here" he said


message 17: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "but their have to be more to it" he said looking back at missy


message 18: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "o" he said " we have to do something, i mean Missy cant live through this"


message 19: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "i dont know" he told her " thank you for helping i just she my best friend and my little sister that i promise to her amilr to take care of her." he look back at luna


message 20: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments spike look around "it up t her bc i want her to go hideing but i hope she would let you hide her" he said quiltly.


message 21: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments " i know it is" he said


message 22: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments miss look up at them "i want to stay with you guys, i dont want to hide" he told them
spike was surprise of her answer


message 23: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments Missy look up up at spike and walk over to him scared. He loo up at her.


message 24: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments Spike pick it up Anselm started to leave the lake


message 25: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments Spike look at it and start ti read making sure she don't see him reading it


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Sydney was standing at the edge of the water. She couldn't help it, but she dove into the freezing cold water and swam down to the bottom. She looked around, she was looking for some animals. She just saw a bunch of boring minoes, cat fish, baby jelly fish, and a couple other fish. She was relxed.

Sydney started crying. SLowly tears mixed with the water surrounding her. Sydney was under water for hours. Breathing perfectly. She kicked off the bottom feeling seaweed on her feet. She looked around and saw no land. She went back under and swam the way she came from. Sydney crawled on land where she was. She sat in the sand and rested her eyes.


message 27: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments spike was watching her from a far distance woundering who she is


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Sydney ended up sitting for an hour. She stood up and turned around. She saw Spike looking at her. She got a bit scared. She didn't know what to think.

She walked to him.


message 29: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments Spike try to hide behide the tree hoping she would ask who are you pr to try to run


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

When Sydney got there she was a little confused.

"Who are you?" she said. "I'm Sydney."


message 31: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments " i am spike" he say as he walk closer to her


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

"So, what's up." she said blushing. Sydney didn't know what to say.


message 33: by Sam (new)

Sam (storm189) | 64 comments "nothing much just head back when i saw you" he told her


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