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nick says he hates what i do for fun but i really don't know how to have fun but to kill people. I mean shooting people and causing them pain is fun right?
"where you going?"nick asked
"none of your business."i said
"to kill more people?"he asked
"no!"i said and walked out. i wore my black coat with the hood up. i walked down Allys. soon night kicked day out of the sky. i was walking home. i turned down an ally and saw three men standing and two men on the ground.
"wheres my money!" said the first guy.
"I-i-i-d-dont-k-know."said one of the guys on the ground
i hid behind a dumpster
"fuck you!" said the second guy and kick the guy in the chest.
"now lets try this again. wheres my money?!"said the first guy as he pulled out a gun. i pull mine that i always i had with me. i said to my self
"do good things. get good back right?"
"please i have a family to take care of!"said the other guy on the ground
"no one here gives a fuck!"said the third guy.
the first guy rasid the gun. hesitent i jumped up and shot the wall so they would back off. the shot scared them.
"WHAT THE HELL!" said the second man
"SHIT!"said the frist man.
the other man ran away. the wind blew my hood fell off the first man looked at me and smiled. he walked closer to me. i moved back. then everything went black.
(John)
I heard them walk into the house but they where talking about a girl. Erin? I didnt know if it was. she will be dead soon. I couldnt bare the pain. how am i to save her. will I? will I? I wont? I dont know.
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I woke to blackness. At first i thought i was home but when I looked I saw that it wasn't my room i was in. no. People came up the steps. i knew what ihad to do. the door opened. I pulled back my arm. closed my fist and as fast and as hard as i could a throw a punch. But i was stoped.
"no.no.no." said a man " we dont hit people."
I smirked
"only smart people do." i said
the man looked at me not knowing what it meant so I knew that he was with out a dought stupid.
he took me into a room and sat me down in a chair.
"now be good." he said
"yeah like that will happen." I kicked his leg as he walked away and he fell face first. I laughed. He got up and forwned at me.
"well that wasn't nice at all." he said
"Like i care!" i said back to him
he narrowed his eyes at me. I did the same to make him mad. it didnt do any good. He opened the door and left. I sat there for what seemed a hour before another guy came in.
"Now I'm going to ask you a the same question I asked your dad. Do you-" I cut him off
"you know my dad!?" I asked in amazment
"Yes but thats not the point here."he offered a smile
I denied.
"No, If you know him then where is he?" I asked
"I'm not going to tell you till you answer my question." he smiled again
"Fine."
"Do you know where my stolen money is?"
"No."
"yes you do."
"no i don't!"
"yes you do!"
"no."
"yes you really do!"
"no i really don't!"
"really?"
"yes. put me on one of those lie detecter thingys."
He sighed "you sure."
"yes I'm sure."
"guess you won't be seeing your father any time soon then."
"ok."
"ok? you haven't seen him in years and all you can say is ok?"
"yup. i can wait."
"sure you can." he walked out
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I couldn't take the dark any more I had to leave. I got up and walked to the basement door. locked. I laughed. I backed down a few stairs and ran up them and slamped into the door. The lach broke and the door fell. I saw men jumping up and going to get guns. I ran upstairs. passed rooms to a the end of the hall. Their was one last room at the end of the hall. I opened the door and walked in. I closed the door.
"Hi." I heard a voice
"Hi?"I looked into the darkness only to see a girl siting on a chair
"What are you doing in here? your one of them aren't you?" she started t rase her voice
"SHHH! And no I'm not one of them i just ran from them." I looked out the door noone was there
"you sure?" She asked
"yes I'm sure!" I replied
she turned away
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I fell into a day dream. I heard screaming and woke. the guy was gone. I was alone again. I hated being alone in dark room but at the same time i knew i had to stay strong and not fall into pain and cry. I looked arownd and saw the moon.Full. I looked at the cars passing by. Not knowing what kind of place this was or what went on in it. I'm sure if they did the street would be empty. Because the people don't want to stand up and say hey their is a kid in there that needs help. Nope people these days aren't like that anymore. Well arownd here anyways...
"agh!"i cried
"what happened?"nick asked
nick is my "brother" not really we just call each other that.
"I hit my head on the car!" I cried
"careful!"he said
"to late for that!"I said
if you asked me about my childhood I would say I don't know much but I was in a room. Wore black and saw black. Nick and I walked inside and I watched TV.
(John)
she was taken away from me. Then things went down. I fell out of the top to the bottom not good and its all because i got to attached to a kid. damn me!