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Thanks a bunch, Molly.

So. For starters, hello, all! I'm already glad I joined this group. I have a few pieces of writing that I'd like to share and get some feedback on, if y'all don't mind. Firstly, I have The Man in the Green Beret, which is a short story exploring a pair of siblings whose innocent game of "Tell the Tale" turns into a flashback-within-flashback of an old man named Peter. Enjoy, and I'd love some feedback, if possible!