Making Connections discussion

Genre: Sci-Fi, Action Adventure, Military

Book Description: Sequel to

Timeline: None set

"Looking for a couple of beta readers, not to edit, but to say what they like don't like, ask questions about what's unclear, etc. Basic critique before re-write and editing stage to see where and how I am connecting with the reader."

If you are interested in beta reading this book, the author will gift you a copy of No Rules Of Engagement to read first if you would like, since this is the sequel. Sign up below so we know who is interested, and then you can contact Thomas directly at storytellerTDW@yahoo.com.

By signing up you are agreeing to read the assigned book and give the author constructive feedback on grammar, plot, characters, etc. Communication will be between you and the author. Please do not use this thread to discuss specifics of the book.

If you are interested in beta reading this book, the author will gift you a copy of No Rules Of Engagement to read first if you would like, since this is the sequel. Sign up below so we know who is interested, and then you can contact Thomas directly at storytellerTDW@yahoo.com.

I'm interested.

OMG Somebody replied!!!
B's send me an E-mail at StorytellerTDW@yahoo.com and I will send you the link to smashwords and the code to get the book for free.

If you like it and are interested after reading the first book then I can forward chapters of the sequel rough draft - before it is re-written and edited. I am not so much looking for editing help as I am questions, comments, thoughts and feelings of the story to help me become a better writer.

I have two Beta readers already but looking to get to where I have 6 to 8 someday.

So far comments have been questions about characters, about asking me to describe something better, what they like and don't like about it. If this gets working and you like my writing - the English is rough but I am working on that on several fronts, but I could also later send you the code for my first book, it is Sci-Fy action adventure that accidently is kind of a love story. I am writing the sequel to it also and have no only one Beta reader for that book at this time.
Anxiously awaiting an E-mail from you. This is so exciting - I thought this thread was dead and gone.
Thank You for responeding B's.
Thomas

haha! right time, right place, I guess! I'm excited too! I'll send the email off right now. I look forward to hearing from you.

Hi Thomas, it would probably good if you gave a summary of your novel, too - to whet the beta-reader's appetites ;)