The outsiders discussion

this is for one of my friends i knew in elemtary school. he was kinda an outsider and everyone made fun of him. on fb he bluntly states (you know how you can write a little bit about yourself in your info) that he cuts himself to ease the pain. he has been through a lot and it breaks my heart that he is alone.

I saved you, I loved you, I'll take it away, I saved you, I love you, I'll take it away.

there you lay, lost and cold in the dark, you think you're all alone, that no one really cares, but you're wrong, oh so wrong, if you could only see, it is Me. I've been here all along, dont you know, you're forgiven, you dont have to bleed in the dark anymore.

oh, the enemy tries to lure you with lies, but if you could only see, won't you let Me in, because I'm all you'll ever need, you're not alone.

cause you are not alone, I stood there watching you bleed away, I was there everynight you begged for no more pain, but if you'd let Me, if you'd just see Me i promise to never let you fall. you're not alone.

there you lay, lost and cold in the dark, you think you're all alone, that no one really cares, but you're wrong, oh so wrong, if you could only see, it is Me. I've been here all along, dont you know, you're forgiven, you dont have to bleed in the dark anymore.

I saved you, I loved you, I'll take it away, I saved you, I love you, I'll take it away.

oh that was kinda touching! do you still know him? you should give him this poem :)

Ty wrote: "oh that was kinda touching! do you still know him? you should give him this poem :)"

thanks. actually i dont really. i know him on facebook but that is about it :)

Cat wrote: "Ty wrote: "oh that was kinda touching! do you still know him? you should give him this poem :)"

thanks. actually i dont really. i know him on facebook but that is about it :)"

that's too bad

yeah :)

Thats really amazing :)

Thanks. I wrote it from Gods point of view like Disciple did in After The World and Skillet did in Whispers in the Dark!

thats really cool, I like it alot :)

Thanks ;)

I really like it :) It's sweet :)

:)

Cat *living for the One who breaths life into me* wrote: "this is for one of my friends i knew in elemtary school. he was kinda an outsider and everyone made fun of him. on fb he bluntly states (you know how you can write a little bit about yourself in yo..."
that is good

Thats really beautiful. I just wish someone had written that for me when i needed it. Youre a fantastic writer and i hope you can someday show it to the guy.