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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

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message 2: by Amelia (new)

Amelia (amiia) Dimitri managed to cross the river, pain searing at his side. He put his hand on the spot, feeling the sticky red liquid.

The brown-haired boy sank to his eyes, unable to hold on to consciousness any longer. "They can't get me here," he repeated to himself, though he himself wasn't sure. Everywhere hurt. He had been on the run for... what? Three weeks now?

He slumped to the cold ground, with a long breath, feeling his muscles relaxing and he changed form.

Whoever found him would have to know how to treat a wolf...


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Jonathan ran into the clearing and saw a body crumpled on the forest floor. Wolf. The slender elf thought.

Jon dropped beside the werewolf. "I wonder what has harmed you." He mumured.

There was a shake in the bushes and Jon jumped.

A water sprite walked into the clearing, surrounded by bugs.

"Idiotic things." the sprite yelled as she swatted them.


message 4: by Cielo (new)

Cielo (Cielo0) | 2 comments Rue was sitting in a forest clearing. She had a rough piece of cloth tied around her arm, and she had her other arm pressing down on it. The cloth had a part that was dyed red with blood.

"Stupid hunters," she muttered to herself. She had been flying with some birds when some shots rang out. She had only been scraped by a bullet, but that doesn't mean that she wasn't bleeding.


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Jonathan scowled. "Why is everyone injured?" He said smoothly like elves do. He held his hand over Dimitri's wounds. "Hyel Weis!' He spoke. The wounds healed and he moved on to the next person's wounds.

He finished and leaned against a tree. "Peace."


message 6: by Amelia (new)

Amelia (amiia) Dimitri's eyes fluttered open. "Where... Where am I?" he asked weakly. Vaguely. he remembered being hurt, but clearly he wasn't anymore.

He sat up and saw Jonathon against the tree. "Hey," he called out, "Do you know what's happening around here?"


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"No." Jonathan smiled, his eyes mischievous. "How-" (BTW, I changed his appearance! Jonathan: http://www.google.com/imgres?q=male+e...))

Jamie interrupted him. "Hello?" SHe said, blushing as she saw Dimitri.


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