Teenage Book Lovers :P discussion

Titled Flowers
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Titled Just Around the Corner
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Titled Another Step Towards You - Theme: Heartbreak.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Titled Guardian Angel - Dedicated to my Family
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Titled Best Friends Forever - Dedicated to my best friend.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Omg, it's been ages since I last added any of my poetry onto this site because I've been busy with school and whatnot. Neverthless - here are my most recent ones.

A Game of Heartbreakers which can be found here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Here's a teaser from that poem:
Don’t play with my heart,
I’ll only play with yours.
Don’t pull me along,
I’ll drag you further.
Don’t hurt me,
I’ll hurt you more.
Don’t play me,
I ain’t no game.
If you dare,
I’ll show you how it’s done.

More of this poem can be seen on the actual link that I've supplied beforehand.

There's also A Picture in Time which can be found here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Here's a tidbit from the poem:

A picture in time,
Forever frozen.
Never changing...

Piano Keys is a short haiku I wrote a while ago in school. To see the poem, please click on this link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Here's my most recent poem. Admittedly, it's not my best... but hey, I'd be happy to hear what y'all think.

It's called A Thousand Tears which can be found here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Anyways, here's a little slice of the poem:

A thousand tears,
A thousand smiles.
Laughing through the pain,
Smiling through the hurt.

Watching you
As my heart cracks
Breaking into a thousand.

Here's a few of my latest pieces... I'd like to think that my writing gets better as I go along, but I'm not sure... It's funny how I started off putting my poetry online so that I could just practice one of my weakest styles of writing: Poetry and now it's just something I love to do...

This piece is called Misplaced Trust which can be found here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Here's an excerpt:

Oh, how it musta hurt
When you fell from grace.
Your lies paintin that void
Black. Tears streamin down my face,
Telling me it’d be okay.
You stabbed me in the back

And here's another one.

This piece is based off a quote I found in my large files of quotes. It's called; Another Chapter, Another Heartbreak and can be found here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

As always, here's an excerpt:

I wish we’d never met,
I wish you’d left me alone.
Can you remember
Those nights talking?
Those secret smiles we shared?
How could it have gone so wrong?

All the pain and tears for nothing.
I can’t believe how stupid I’ve been.
I guess I’m a masochist.
For putting my heart
Through all that pain.
You promised.

For more, click on the link. :)


All criticism is welcome.