Goodreads Nepal (सुपठन् नेपाल) discussion

Dear All, Please read this story written by my sister
Manavi Dhakal and let me know how you find it. I am encouraging her to write a book so it would be nice to get some feedback.
http://manavi-stories.blogspot.com/20...

Beautifully written.love how shes written such intricate details.she should go for a book..:)