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message 1: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((This is another Role Play topic that falls under The Experimentals. The current one is not ending or restarting here. For more information, see page three of the "Plot" topic.))

Dr. Diana Pierce thought she was a good person for the most part. She picked up after her dog and was always polite to telemarkers. She had never cheated on any of her boyfriends or looked through their text messages. Her house was clean and she was a pretigious genetics scientist who made a great living doing what she loved. No, she wasn't a bad person. She was purely unorthodox.

Diana walked in today with a charismatic smile and a hot cup of coffee. Today she began a new experiment, one that she was very proud of. While it would be trying at times, it would all be worth it. She was enhancing the human race by grafting animal genes into you humans. The technology for this had just been invented and this was breakthrough science. Her name would be all over this one, and she knew it would be successful.

She walked into the new developments wing of the hospital and slid a clipboard from one of the slots. A group of teenagers, 12-17 would be delivered today in about fifteen minutes. Examination of social and emotional skills should be tested immediately. This could be exciting.

She took the elevator and walked down the hallway in her long lab coat and heels. Her long brown hair shined in the fluorescent lighting. She turned down a hallway and ducked into a room. It was an interview room with a lags space and a one-way window. From the interviewees poit of view, it was a mirror, but Diana would be watching them through the window part.

Ten minutes after Diana sat down, five large crates were dragged into the room. She knew there was a teen in each one. She nodded and the crates were taken into the room. It was empty and white. She clicked her pen open to see and write down the teen's reactions.


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair groaned as she awoke she then sat up putting her hand on her head feeling a headache. As her vison cleared she blinked a couple times noticing she was in a crate,this is wierd she thought. Was she dreaming this? Blair then crawled out of the crate which had been reluctantly opened. As she got out of the crate she took in her surroundings cautiously, she was in an all white room with bright lights. Blair stood up covering her eyes a little from her eyes which were still sensitive. "Hello? Is anyone here? I'm not sure why I'm here and I would apprecaite some help" she said aloud in the room.


message 3: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments Yi Jung woke with a start. He had been taken from the streets of Korea without any reason. After that, he woke up in this crate. It slowly opened and Yi Jung stared out into the bright, white, room. He slowly crawled out of the crate. He hated the feeling of crawling, he hated the crate. He felt like an animal. He heard another girl speak and turned to face her. "Jwesongheyo. I'm not quite sure."


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair jumped to the sound of someones voice she turned towards him with a hint of nervousness in her eyes. "Well that helps" she said sarcastically to herself. "Where do you think we are exactly. I just remember hanging out at the park when someone approached me and I'm guessing they knocked me out" she said with a sigh. That would explain the headache


message 5: by Amburger (last edited Mar 18, 2012 01:30PM) (new)

Amburger | 725 comments "I was just in Seoul. But where are we now?" Yi Jung said with a thick Korean accent. "You obviously aren't Korean so we probably aren't there anymore." He looked at the boy lying an the floor, then to the other crates, and finally back at Blair. "What the hell is going on?"


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair shook her head "I reallly have no idea but I want to find out" she ran her hands through her hair letting out a sigh of fustraition. "No I'm from Britian,we really could be anyway" her voice was clear with an English accent. Bliar started to get nervous and said to Yi Jung with some fear in her voice "Do you think we did something wrong?"


message 7: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments "I did not." Yi Jung said with cold confidence. "Hopefully. As long as they did no to my family I am happy." He sat down on the cold, hard floor and closed his eyes.


message 8: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments ((PSSSSSSSST! CAN I MAKE A GIRL CHACTER? LIKE AN ASSITANT TO THE SCIENTIST???????? ^-^))


message 9: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((Go ahead.))


message 10: by ღஐKendraღஐ (last edited Mar 18, 2012 05:56PM) (new)

ღஐKendraღஐ She nodded "Just a thought" she looked around the colorless room hating it she hated small confined spaces and this was a perfect example of one. Blair searched her mind for what was happening or why she was here. Blairs memory was still blury but she remembered it was a casual saturday exploring around her home and walking her dog in the park. Who knows how long she had been in that create.


message 11: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments They woke up right on time, at exactly 8:45 a.m. Diana began videotaping and recording the reactions of the children. She furiously scribbled on her notepad. The Asian boy looked like he would be a bit of a challenge to break in, but Diana was sure that he would break eventually. The other boy seemed paranoid. The girl was tryin to find an explanation for everything. She was intelligent. Diana marked this in her notes.

When they began to speak to one another Diana knew it was time to begin the stability tests. She flipped a switch on the control panel to her left and watched as the entire interview room went completely dark. She could see the children through her night-vision camera, but she highly doubted that they could see anything.

Diana pushed another button. It created sounds of footsteps. The invisible speakers boomed these noises into the dark room.


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair stumbled back almost tripping in surprise all of a sudden the bright white room was in total darkness. It was as if someone put a blanket over the lights killing the light making it able to see. She heard the sounds of the fitsteps in the room. Blair backed up towards one of the corners of the room. Blairs eyes darted alround the pitch black room trying to see something or one of the figures who were making the noises. She couldn't see anything and started to breath heavily a thought then hit her wait if these people had come into the room where had they entered? She did not see any doors when the lights were on or she did not see or hear anyone enter. Could it have just been something to mess with them or confuse?


message 13: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments Yi Jung calmly looked up. Darkness wasn't something you saw often in Seoul, but he found it oddly relaxing. He stood up and turned in a circle slowly, trying to see where the footsteps were coming from.


message 14: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments "What the hell" Alan stood up to find his head hit the top of a metal cage he felt angry and he rarely felt angry something inside him made him want to go berserk and tear the cage open but he kept his cool like usual and he scanned the room and saw nothing the lights where out but he could feel people around him it was freaky.
"i could do with a hug right now where is tessa" he wondered


message 15: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments (guess who is back)


message 16: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments "Yo open up the cage, people do get hungry" Alan shouted


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments ((can I pretty much have my same guy but an assistant to her? and also a new guy :D ))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not gonna cry I'm not gonna cry I'm not gonna cry...... DANG IT YOUR GONNA MAKE ME CRY!!! *extremely happy now*))


ღஐKendraღஐ ((leave it as it is...I think because Calin and Aiden are meant for the other ;) I say we leave it as it is))


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair as she tried walking in the dark all of a sudden tripped over a create and shrieked a little. Falling over the create she scowled "Stupid Create..." she said getting up and trying to find her way in the dark.


message 21: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments Tessa was in this dark room she was meditating she was in a state of complete calm. That's when she felt it an unknown bit of her body it was wild, it was free and what made it more scary was that it was powerful, If she was here that would mean that Alan was here too their were heading back from there last assignment when they had been snatched judging and she had been in this pose for three hours so clearly she needed to find Alan, Tessa got up and brushed the dirt and hit her head on the ceiling of her cage "Ouch" She yelled, She could really do with Alan company right now


message 22: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments (where exactly are we???? I have been wondering how long we were going to hang around this dark room)


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! IDEA!!!! So, since my charrie hasn't really done anything impacting, I was wondering.... Could I restart where he's one of the guards, then rp the part where he "changes" to an experiment caused by the accident? Maybe when one of the rped charries that are going to be experimented on happens?))


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair started to get nervous her heart rate quickened she could still hear the footsteps all around her where there people in there or not? Looking around quickly but seeing nothing but blackness. What had they done to deserve this and better yet who was doing this? She wondered.


message 25: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments Yi Jung felt the nervousness of the girl beside him. "I don't think whoever it is will hurt." Yi Jung said quietly to her. He didn't want this girls nervousness to get to him.


ღஐKendraღஐ "Ya...maybe its just hard not to think about it you know? What if they will-" she cut herself off not wanting to sound weak or nervous she laughed nervously "Sorry" she apologized about how she was being foolish


message 27: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments Alan tore at the bars


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((Alrighty, restarting with Calin... in a moment...))


message 29: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((None of your characters should be experiments yet.))

The kids were talking to each other, reacting relatively normal to the darkness. She jotted this down on her pad of paper.

She checked darkness of the list of tests she was to perform that day. Next was the reveal. Diana's pink lips smirked. These kids had no idea that they were about to become revolutionary experiments that would change the world forever, but they would soon know.

Diana brightened the room once again and cut the noise of footsteps. She tapped on a microphone next to her and cleared her throat. "Welcome, children, to your new home." The mic distorted her voice so that she sounded like a man with a deep voice. "You have been chosen out of hundreds of test samples to come here. Congratulations! If you survive these first few weeks here at the lab, you will be a superior race, in one sense or another. But of course, you must survive to see that day. I assume that none of you want to die. So listen carefully. Don't fight back against any of us or we will do this on your first attempt."

Diana pressed a button in her control pad that turned the floor where the kids were sitting or standing into a taser. It sparked with electricity.


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair looked horribly confused "new home? Oh no...." all her words sunk in and her heart sank this wasn't good. She didn't want to be a test subject all of a sudden a painful shock of electricity ran through her. She shrieked in surprise and pain wincing at the shock she collapsed to the floor knocking out.


message 31: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments Yi Jung felt the shock and fell to the floor beside Blair. He remained silent despite the pain. It was something he had learned back home where his father beat him, his sister, and mother. If they made any sound, it would get worse. he slowly closed his mind and eyes to the pain, passing out.


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments Damian remained silent, not really feeling it. He knew he would be out cold in a matter of seconds, but he resolved to put on a show. He stayed standing despite the hum of pain in his head, staring defiantly at the camera in the corner. Eventually his vision spotted and he was forced to his knees as the electricity surged through him. He blacked out and sank all the way to the floor, the pain overruling his resolve.


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments ((most likely as a guard. I'm actually not sure xD ))


message 34: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((Post questions in plot topic. I'll answer there.))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Calin stood statue still outside the room, six other guards were stationed along with him. One per 'creature' - as they called the experiments - and two extra, just in case. They couldn't hear a thing coming through the door they stood by. At the beginning, when the creatures had been dragged into the room, Calin had been alert and hard hearted towards the creatures, now he was bored and his mind wandered.

When he had first been stationed outside of a room, guarding experiments, he had once been so eager that he'd stood stock still, trying to be as perfect as possible, and accidently locked his knees and other joints. After a while of staying still, he just had to shift a bit, and he nearly collapsed in the biting pain. Huge mistake. He'd learned not to be so stiff after that.

He had also trained his mind to be able to wander when he knew he had time, but at the same time stop from completely day-dreaming. He had also once made the mistake of day-dreaming, then jumping in surprise as the door opened and everyone else snapped to attention to bring an experiment out of it's cell, while he'd had to collect himself for a few seconds before moving.

One more thing he'd taught himself to do, something else they'd forgotten to teach during his short training. Don't stare. Of course, don't be surprised at the appearances, don't wonder what kind of gruesome monster they'd become, don't throw up, mostly, don't look into their eyes. He had been told not to sympathize, but to actually build up an immunity to the emotions that surged when you glimsped indescribable eyes leading to a literal void took longer than he'd thought.

Calin had forget-me-not blue eyes, so deep and dark yet so clear. His skin was evenly pale, but a complimentary pale, compared to his brightly blonde hair and eyes. He'd been nick-named "Pretty Boy" when he'd been picked up to be a security guard. He had been at it for maybe seven months, a day or two beyond perhaps. The nick-name hadn't faded. Calin recalled vividly three encounters with "F-Class" creatures. "Foolish-Class". There were plenty of experiments who were deranged and mindless, wild. "F-Class" were named by the guards on account of their being wild, and smart at the same time. They were the ones who tried to break free, directly. He'd seen one guard die in their path.

Calin's arms hung limply at his sides, his left hand resting beside the taser on his belt. He had wielded it multiple times, used it on creatures less than fifteen. He'd developed a given hatred for the experiments, but his wasn't as overwhelming as others he worked with. He was rarely among the first who pulled the tasers out against a creature when they were threatened. But he wasn't in any case one of the last. Especially since he'd watched as one of his best friends die right before his eyes, at the claws of a monster. Calin's left hand flexed a bit, and his gaze lifted to the door.


message 36: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments (Have we been spliced or not)


message 37: by Midnightmist (new)

Midnightmist | 227 comments (Just to make sure my characters have been spliced and are being kept under guard)


message 38: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((None in this room have been experimented on yet.))


message 39: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments Oops. That electric shock was a bit too strong for the new children. On any of the veteran experiments, that shock would barely be enough to faze them, but she had to remind herself that these were newbies. They couldn't handle the shock. She flipped a switch that shocked them again, more likely. That would perk them up quickly, but not without pain.

As the kids started to wake again Diana continued her speech. "Follow my directions clearly, or you feel that pain a thousand times over. Now. I will now ask you to line up and tell me your name and old residence. City and country please. Quickly, we don't have all day. Remember, obey and survive."


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Melanie wrote: "((None in this room have been experimented on yet.))"

((Just in case you're directing this at me..... The guards still refer to the humans that will be experimented on as creatures/monsters, along with those who have been experimented on.))


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair gain felt the electrical currents go through her body but it wasn't has bad as the other one. Her eyes slowly opened again feeling that the electricity had jolted her she slowly stood up again as the voice spoke. She tensed a little as the maksed voice spoke, basically if they didn't listen they would be punished. Then she figured she would have to listen,wanting to survive through whatever they had in mind. Blair seeing she was first in the line cleared her throat and said trying to sound calm but really she was a nervous wreck "Blair Lyndon,I resided in Leeds,England"


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments Damian was used to pain, but the tingling sensation the shock left behind threw him off-kilter. He walked pointedly to his place in line, aware of belng closely observed. When his time came, he drew himself up to his full height, trying to be the image of defiance and determination. "Damian McLauren. Detroit, Michigan."
He knew how to be imposing. Years of street-life in Detroit had taught him to look strong. The street crawlers didn't mess with you if you could put up a fight. He was just hoping the same logic applied here.


message 43: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments Yi Jung slowly stood up glared at the walls of the room. "Seung Yi Jung. Anyang-si, Gyeonggi-do
South Korea." He muttered quietly. Although he was short, we he became angry, his appearance was intimidating.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments hypocrite clams... wrote: "Damian was used to pain, but the tingling sensation the shock left behind threw him off-kilter. He walked pointedly to his place in line, aware of belng closely observed. When his time came, he dre..."

((Hehehe... D. M. and 'D'etroit 'M'ichigan. :D))


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments ((woah...... totally didn't realize that! I like it! :D ))


message 46: by Melanie (last edited Apr 05, 2012 05:17PM) (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments Diana knew that Yi Jung could speak English. He was defying her already. She let this one blunder slide, but more would mean certain death.

"Thank you. This information will be kep private, if you were worried. Now, time for some athletic training. Blair, you first." Diana hit a switch and the platform Blair was standing on rose up into the air. Automatic iron cages snapped over the other kid's heads. There would be no assissting Ms. Lyndon now. Diana motioned to one of the lab techs to hit a few buttons on their computer. A monkey bar contraption emerged from the ceiling and several platforms rose from the floor. A cargo net dropped from the rafters. A foam pad was thrown on the floor by a guard.This created an obstacle course.

"Blair, your objective is to swin across the monkey bars, jump from platform to platform, climb the cargo net, then finish by jumping onto that foam pad at the end of the course. You get one try. Fall, and you drop twenty feet. Good luck!" Diana knew this test of strength was too much for any normal human, but she forced them go do this to see how they reacted to pain of the drop. There would be a few broken bones.

Diana was excited.


message 47: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 725 comments ((LOL! she obviously doesn't know Korea. Those were his city and province and the South Korea. AHHAHAHAHA!))

Yi Jung stared in shock. "Crazy woman. We can't do this." He muttered quietly to himself.


message 48: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 102 comments ((I want to make her seem as uncaring and ignorant as possible. Am I succeeding? ;) ))


ღஐKendraღஐ Blair looked around helplessly trying to make up her mind of what to do 'well there isn't much I can do other than do it. But this looks impossible' she thought to herself. She bit her lip "Ok...I will try" she looked back at the others then looked at the obstacle. She took a deep breath and started to steadily swing from each bar.

At the last bar she had a glimmer of hope she could do this but she was horribly wrong. The platform seemed to far away from her to reach but she tried she made it a few inches from the platform almost grasping it. She shrieked as she fell hitting the floor. Blair groaned in pain and since she landed on her side 4 of her ribs had been broken. She tried to get up but couldn't she just laid there Sinclair nt in pain that came from all over.


ღஐKendraღஐ Melanie wrote: "((I want to make her seem as uncaring and ignorant as possible. Am I succeeding? ;) ))"

((Yes u are succeeding! You have made a very strong character :))


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