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message 1: by Elliott (last edited Apr 01, 2012 09:11PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Post your stories in this topic and hopefully someone will read them! (We're currently brainstorming for a better way to get more people to read stories so we can talk about that in here as well.)


message 3: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Is this a new story feedback or one where you're desperately wanting reads?


message 4: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Well, since this is right here...
One of the big things I picked up on during the revolution was that generally everybody is dissatisfied when it comes to story feedback. Which makes sense, because that topic was mildly to extremely useless.

I think an easy way of fixing that would be to go into a 'you review me, I review you' kind of system. But I don't know. I'm not clever enough for this stuff. SO YOU SHOULD ALL TALK AND FIGURE OUT WHAT YOU WANT.


message 5: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I hate that system. D:


message 6: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Emily [Time is theoretical] wrote: "I hate that system. D:"

I just posted this in another topic but ... yeah. I kind of hate swapping just because it tends to lower the level of people's feedback. That is, they'll give something a good review just because they want a good review in return. Experience on sites like Inkpop and Figment has demonstrated this ... On the other hand, it does force people to read things. So, I don't know.


message 7: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I have a peanut sized attention span when reading stories on the internet. I usually just skim.


message 8: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Emily [Time is theoretical] wrote: "I have a peanut sized attention span when reading stories on the internet. I usually just skim."

Yeah, that's a problem I have as well....


message 9: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Baxter wrote: "Well, since this is right here...
One of the big things I picked up on during the revolution was that generally everybody is dissatisfied when it comes to story feedback. Which makes sense, because..."


I don't really want anyone to feel obliged to read my work just because I read theirs. I mean, it would be nice if they were to return the read but it were seen as the "right" thing to do then I feel like writing feedback (something that I enjoy immensely) would become a chore, or that people would be motivated to do it for the wrong reasons- as Brigid said, part of the reason I think Inkpop went down the drain was because of the review system.


message 10: by Hannah (new)

Hannah | 954 comments T e s n i wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Well, since this is right here...
One of the big things I picked up on during the revolution was that generally everybody is dissatisfied when it comes to story feedback. Which make..."


^This.


message 11: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Okay great. So what should be done instead?


message 12: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Baxter wrote: "Okay great. So what should be done instead?"

I...have no idea xD


message 13: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I guess you can't enforce that everybody will read people's writing. :\


message 14: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Ugh, yeah, that one is extremely difficult. I wouldn't mind swapping, as long as the reviews were honest.


message 15: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments NEW RULE: EVERYBODY MUST READ EVERY STORY EVER POSTED ON GOODREADS.
That'll definitely work.


message 16: by Hannah (new)

Hannah | 954 comments Colby wrote: "NEW RULE: EVERYBODY MUST READ EVERY STORY EVER POSTED ON GOODREADS.
That'll definitely work."


I like this plan.


message 17: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
I WILL NOW SACRIFICE THE REMAINDER OF MY LIFE TO DO THIS.


message 18: by Colby (new)

Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "I WILL NOW SACRIFICE THE REMAINDER OF MY LIFE TO DO THIS."

I must say, I'm most excited for the trashy novels. ;)


message 19: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I've tried, but I've always failed.


message 20: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments EMILY HAS ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO HER SERIAL KILLER STORY

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Emily [Time is theoretical] wrote: "EMILY HAS ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO HER SERIAL KILLER STORY

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."


ASDFGHJKL; THIS IS LITERALLY MY FAVORITE STORY ON HERE RIGHT NOW. GO EMILY!


message 22: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Colby wrote: "NEW RULE: EVERYBODY MUST READ EVERY STORY EVER POSTED ON GOODREADS.
That'll definitely work."


I WILL BELATEDLY JOIN EVERYONE THAT CONGRATULATED YOU ON A FANTABULOUS SOLUTION.


message 23: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments There's a new chapter in my new story! I am posting a convenient link to the prologue in case you've yet to read it :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 24: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
MEEP MEEP I LOVE YOUR STORY. *goes to read*


message 25: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments YAY LAV IS MY FAVOURITE.


message 26: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) wrote: "Emily [Time is theoretical] wrote: "EMILY HAS ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO HER SERIAL KILLER STORY

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

ASDFGHJKL; THIS IS LITERALLY MY FAVORITE STORY..."


YOU JUST MADE MY FREAKING DAY


message 27: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments SOMEBODY PLEASE VOTE ON ME POLL.


message 28: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments CHAPTER 5 OF "MIND OF A MONSTER"! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 29: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) hey if you guys could check out the first chapter in my children's chapter book called Pepper and Me that would be great thanks!Just search it!


message 30: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments CHAPTER 6 OF "MIND OF A MONSTER"!:D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

(view spoiler)


message 31: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Chapter 13 of Manic Pixie Dream Girl! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 32: by Katherine (new)

Katherine | 30 comments Baxter wrote: "Well, since this is right here...
One of the big things I picked up on during the revolution was that generally everybody is dissatisfied when it comes to story feedback. Which makes sense, because..."

why don't you guys make a topic for people to post the few stories they really want reviews on put make the request that if you post a story you should comment on someone elses story


message 33: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav [lately I've been feeling] wrote: "Chapter 13 of Manic Pixie Dream Girl! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.


message 34: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Chapter 7 and Chapter 8 of Mind of a Monster!


message 35: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Chapter 14 of Manic Pixie Dream Girl! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 36: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Chapter 9 and 10 of Mind of Monster. :3


message 37: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I'll read it when I get over the ending of the Book Thief.

Just. Finished it.


message 38: by Isaac (last edited Apr 24, 2012 06:28PM) (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Breaking Free

IT'S REALLY SHORT I PROMISE.


message 39: by Elliott (last edited Apr 24, 2012 09:58PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
This is the short story I wrote for the Less Than Three Book contest. It didn't get in, but I'm still very happy with this story. It's about a boy and a girl who are close friends online and how they meet for the first time and things don't go the way she imagined they would. It also references The Perks of Being a Wallflower a lot because I love that book.

The Girl Who Always Knows What To Say
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 40: by Stacey (new)

Stacey (uhm-hello) | 2 comments Hello people!!
I just joined this group recently, but I've really been wanting someone to read some of my writing. I feel bad about just interrupting like this, but if anybody has any time to spare, please feel free to offer constructive criticism, por favor! :) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
This is sort-of a chapter of something longer, but I just wanted to know if it was confusing or hard to follow or boring?
:)


message 41: by Mirvan. (new)

Mirvan. Ereon (mirvanereon) | 51 comments Hey there people =P


message 42: by Mirvan. (new)

Mirvan. Ereon (mirvanereon) | 51 comments i will post mine later


message 43: by Anastasia (new)

Anastasia (booksteainsanity) | 955 comments Stacey, I'm interested, but are you sure that's the right link? I clicked on it and it said something about "Happy New Year's" and poetry.


message 44: by Stacey (new)

Stacey (uhm-hello) | 2 comments Anastasia wrote: "Stacey, I'm interested, but are you sure that's the right link? I clicked on it and it said something about "Happy New Year's" and poetry."

Really? I clicked on it and it worked. Interesting...
Try again? :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 46: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I created an original knight for the Round Table and wrote a short story about him for school. It's rushed, but I think it turned out pretty nicely.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 47: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Chapter 15 of Manic Pixie Dream Girl!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 48: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments EEEEEEEK.


message 49: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Chapter 11 of Mind of a Monster! :D


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) I wrote this essay-dialogue-thing?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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