punks and emos discussion

post all of your poetry hear....

Opposites

Darkness,light
Pain,sanity
Sorrow,faith
Hatred,love
All opposites
Like me and you
I will never escape
The darkness
You will forever
Stay in the light
I will forever
Suffer through pain
You forever shall
Have sanity
My heart is filled
With sorrow
Yours is clouded
With faith
I love you
You hate me

Most of my poetry stinkz but here's one:
How Can You Be My Friend
I feel the pain of it
In my hair
In my cheeks
In my toes
In my bones
That stab of betrayal
That you would do such things
Tell my thoughts
my secrets
my muses
my wonderings
my wishes
and my dreams
To everyone beside you
And then I remember all the
other hurts you've thrown at me
And I'm thinking
How can you be my firend
when you step on all my joy
Over-powering it by tossing your news at me
How can you be my frid
When you always succeed in putting me down
How can you be my friend
when I hear you've called me names
How can you be my friend
When you seem to exist thousands of miles away
How can you be my friend
When I'm sure you're not...

Friendship

Friendship isn’t about what clothes you wear
It’s not about lying to get someone to like you
Or how far away you are
Not about going to the coolest party
It isn’t about how beautiful or ugly you are
It isn’t about how smart or stupid you are
It’s not about where you live
It’s not about how much money you have Or what school you go to
Or what shoes you wear
It’s not about what color your skin is
Or what music you like
Or what sports you play
It’s not about how big your family is
Or how big or crooked your teeth are
Friendship’s not just about what kind of club you’re in or what you wish to be when you “grow-up”
It’s not about gossiping about “Who did this or that?”
It’s not about betraying someone to be in with the “cool people”.
FRIENDSHIP
JUST
ISN’T!!!
But Friendship is about sitting on the couch watching scary movies and throwing popcorn at Freddy
It’s about laughing for no reason at all
It’s about jumping on your bed and sticking post-it notes on your be and the wall
It’s about making the worst kind of cake you’ve ever had and giving it to the dog (like peanut butter and carrot cake)
It’s about doing stupid things together
About eating cookie dough on the porch and giving some to the birds
It’s about staying up all night whispering secrets to each other
And after fighting just laughing about it and saying “I’m Sorry”
It’s about never letting anyone or anything get between you
It’s about not caring what anyone thinks about the freakish shirt you made with your B.F.F.L.
It’s about making up a new club and never telling anyone else
But MOST of all it’s about trusting someone enough to let them know everything about you
Only you can choose who you share a special friendship with!
*I had to put that last line in there and the middle one(its in caps) because I wrote it 4 skewl*

I wrote a poem!!!

I just forgot!!!

wow....

Awwwwwww...that's sad

yeah that is really sad. if it weren't for all the sadness that would actually be a good poem...

it is a good poem...the sadness helps u picture wat shes thinkin and mabi how her mind works...isnt that the point of a poem?

Silence

I see the dead
Fill the streets
The eerie silence
Will never end
I see the blood
Streaming down
My face and wait
For it to finally stop
I lie in the streets
Watching people
Fall to their deaths
I hear the screams
Of innocent children
Being beaten to death
I was the lucky one
My exacutioner was
Shot before I was dead
The last image of him
Still lingers in my head
The heat burns me
The cold freezes me
The eerie silence
Breaks my sanity
Yet I’m not dead yet
I wait for death to
Still come and take
My pain away

Jessica wrote: "it is a good poem...the sadness helps u picture wat shes thinkin and mabi how her mind works...isnt that the point of a poem?"

thats true, it was a good poem though, just very sad

yes. it was...but sumtimes the tru pain and sadness in a poem makes it 1 of the best

yeah

i can b deep....lol

oh definately

yup...but i can also b a pyschosocial nut-case

All these poems are good. And full of heart and emotion. I'm not good at poetry but here it goes....


I sit in the dark,
Waiting for your return.
It feels like it'll be forever,
Feels like it'll be eternity,
Before my lips meet yours again.
I'm in love with you and you know it,
I know your in love with me too.
You had to leave,
But said it wasn't for long.
Still the loneliness eats me,
The waiting is slowly killing me,
Come back and bring me to life,
Save me from the loneliness I feel,
When you leave me for a moment.
Soon you will be here,
The loneliness will stop.
Oh how I crave that moment,
Like a cutter craves a knife.
I love,
So please, please,
Come back soon.


Sorry, it probably sucked. I just thought of it.

wow...that was amazing!!

This is 1 of my 4 favorites:

Falling apart

Everything is falling apart
Everyone is letting me down
Ever since you did
I will always hope
Something will be good
Until I least expect it
Everything will fall apart
And everyone will die

Love

Love is beautiful
But love is pain
Love is like a rose
But a rose is the
Symbol of death
Your heart will
Be broken
But all you feel
Is love towards
Who is breaking
Your heart

Thanx, my boyfriend just left for vacation so I guess that's how the poem came to me! lol ur poems are good by the way!

thank u...my bf broke up wit me...soo i guess thats where most of mine are inspired

I haven't ever gone through a break up. This is my first time to have a bf. I use to write a ton of poems (even though I don't think I'm good at it) about crushes I would have. And other stuff.

Friends

I am standing
Here alone in
The cold and
Darkness my
Friends all left
Me after I
Pleaded them to
Stay
They are all just jerks
They left me here
To die, to fend
for myself
I just want a
Friend who won't
Leave me to die
I will fight for
Myself
I don't need
Anybody to tell me
If I have the
Right to
Live or die

Darkness


The Darkness use to scare me,
It use to haunt my dreams,
But now with you it sooths me,
It keeps the nightmares at bay.
With Darkness my friend,
And you with me,
I shall live eternity,
Happily.

A War

Everyone thinks that
They are in my head
When they don't know
That a war takes place
They are fighting to end
My life when I am
Fighting to save it
They think I am easy
To read but they are wrong
They read my lies because
No one can ever know the truth
About my life
I sit in a corner waiting
For someone to finally
Understand that they
Are being lied to but
They keep fighting to
End me when I am
Fighting to save my
Thoughts and my life

Ur a really good poet, Jessica!

thank u! so r u, sandi!

Really?! Cool! Thanx!

YES! no prob!

Missing you every minute,
Missing you every second,
Wishing you were here with me.
That's what I do now,
Until the weeks over,
That's all I'll do.
Wishing you were here,
Your arms around me,
Holding me close.
Even in a crowd,
I feel alone,
If you were here,
And not there,
Things would be better.
I would feel less alone in this familiar place.
The Darkness wouldn't be my enemy.
It envolopes me, feeding off my sorrow.
But with you here,
It hugs me.
It gives me comfort at night,
And keeps the nightmares at bay.
Missing you,
Is all I can do,
For now.

You think so? Thanx! I was never really taught how to write poetry I just did it one day. I never knew it was good.

wow all of ya'll are amazing here is one of mine
SCARES
I am scarred from head to toe
these are the scares that do not show
they are hidden deep inside
because thats where I cut
and thats where they hide
no one will ever know
because I will never let it show
no matter how it hurts
I won’t tell
because I am hidden in a shell
no one knows the real me
just the fake sharade I put on
day to day
my “normal” image as some may put it
it can’t help protecting them not wearing my pain on my sleeve making it oblivious so every one knows like some do can it?
I don’t NEED anyone else I am fine on my own
if only people would take time and listened they would have known
I don’t like to keep it bottled up I want to tell
I want to break out of my shell
but I want to tell some one who will understand
is that too much to ask for it’s not a command

sorry it's a little longer than some of the others

amazing meagan...and i dnt think she meant like literally she cuts..like emotional scars..but maybe it means she cuts..idk

no I don't cut

ooh I wrote this one last night its one of my happier poems

MY SUN
I want to thank you
because wether you know it or not you are my sun
the safe place after the storms done
you always come out and bring back the fun
you always make me forget the pain
and bring back the smile like some kind of game
with you there is no such thing as pain
its all just gain
you aren’t like every one else
you aren’t concerned with only yourself
you take others into consideration
its like a vacation
from every thing else
I can breathe for real I’m alive
even just when I think of you
I thrive
it would be torcher and hell
if you weren’t there can you tell
with out you I would be dead
you can tell exactly when somethings wrong like you read it out of a book
and your smile brightens up my day with just one look
I melt at the sound of your voice
wow your perfect and you are always my choice of a person to talk to you understand
you are my dry land
my safe harbor
my sun

that was longer than the first one sorry
:(

lol

I don't physically cut myself but its like um....experiences that leave their marks does that make since?

ok making sure its a rare case when I 'm making since lol

LOL
:P

wow IDK what 2 say now lol........um....?

boo aaaahhh my exlcamation points dont work...

untitled

inside
heart is black
from the lies
betrayal
n fear
i dont want to distinguish these feelins anymore
i lay there in pure darkness
and try to hold back from crying pathetic tears
inside black
im scared, terrified to feel it again
im confused on the lies and the deceit
choking on the words you said
that very day replays in my head

lost
lost again
because your gone again
im not free
trapped and tortured in this prison with lonelyness and vain
never to see your face again
i look in the mirror and see chains
that wrap around me and wont let go
because you keep wraping them
i want to be let free
but you've inprisoned me
i rapture again with the same curse
and every damn thing made it worse.
i want the pain to go away
so i can live another day
you say your better than me
you make me feel horrendous
when you say it i believe it
i damn the day my eyes met yours
cuz now im fighting all these wars that dont belong to me
i want to be let free
please let go of me
with each chain you wrap around me i get closer to it i see
you dont care the tears i shed
now all i want is to be dead

and tears fall
you said that you miss her
and tears fall
again i knock at your door
u close it
n tears fall
you say there is hope for us yet
and tears fall
then u put my hand in the fire
and tears fall
i hear the patronizing voices in my head
n tears fall
I held the peice of u i had left
n tears fall
i look back at what we used two be
and tears fall
i think its my biggest regret
tears fall
days pass waiting for your return
and tears fall

You guys r all amazing poets.

u really liked it ? i thought it was kind of 3rd grade sorry im a bit uh when it comes to my own work