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Amy, And salute when you say that! (aka Storm)
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Dec 21, 2008 08:00PM
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Thats cool! We can so sooo much with that little sentece. The boy fell of a cliff, he was cold from the crispy winter air. He was rushed to a hospital and put in a immediate surgery. Everyone in the hospital was called in. At the end, teh boy had a study heart rate, but was unconciouse.
like that. I mean, a longer short story than that, but it would make a good beginning. ANd you could choose where the cliff was, who he was with.... we might be able to do this after the Plot Machine contest.
The sentence (from another group) is:
I have one brown eye and one green eye. The green eye sees the truth, and the brown eye sees much, much more.
I have one brown eye and one green eye. The green eye sees the truth, and the brown eye sees much, much more.
of course. And Seth- that one was invented by Gail Carson Levine (ella enchanted) in her book "Writing Magic". They didn't make it up.
oh. ok. just checking. From GCL, I also liked "The first time I say Stephen, he painted a hex sign on my arm and I couldn't move it for three days"
I have a contest idea:You make up a telivision series (could be romance, action, sci fi, ect.) and write the pilot episode for it in script form.
would this be like a real story with better sentences than "the boy fell off a cliff" or just like a bunch a events that are written that way with no explaination like for exampleHe shot the man. The shooter stole the now-dead-man's wife. THe dead man came back and haunted his killer. THe shooter went mad from the haunting and was put in a insane asylum. The man broke the asylums window with his head and cracked his skull. The insane escapee ran naked through the town. The runner dived off a cliff and lived.
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ok makes more sense.i drew that story in stick people format and have been trying to make it animated on my computer so i keep thinking about it when ever i am on the computer
sorry i bring them up a buncha time but i like stick people drawings :)
no kidding. We noticed. But what we would do is have a first sentance, e.g. "The boy fell off a cliff". Then you would write a story from there, doing whatever you wanted. If we had all those details there wouldn't be room to make anything up.
*sad sigh* the 'couple dies' is lagging farther and farther behind. *sobs hystariclly* how do you spell that, anyway?





