Erudite Readers discussion

Hi, I'm posting a link to a short story I wrote. It's 29 pages long (in Word), so if you have time give it a read. If you feel like giving feedback I can take it! Hope you enjoy!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Great story it was cool

Jay wrote: "Great story it was cool"

Thanks I really appreciate it!

It was good!!!

Scott wrote: "It was good!!!"

Thanks! I appreciate it.

Your welcome

It is really long so at first I was heistant to read it but I'm so glad I did it was becuasewhen reaidng it it flew by and it was so great! Keep up the good work :)

kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: "It is really long so at first I was heistant to read it but I'm so glad I did it was becuasewhen reaidng it it flew by and it was so great! Keep up the good work :)"

Thanks so much! The first 6 chapters of my novel are posted as well, the short story is a prequel. You might be interested if you have time and I'd love feedback!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Jill wrote: "kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: "It is really long so at first I was heistant to read it but I'm so glad I did it was becuasewhen reaidng it it flew by and it was so great! Keep up the good work :)"

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I'll have to check it out! Thanks for posting!