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I entered this poem in contest, let me know what you guys think

Disconnected
By: Jenia

I thought everything
Finally coming back into a place
Then it all came crashing down on me

As much as I didn't want to believe it
Deep down knew that it was real
That it wasn't horrifying dream

Knowing there was no escape from it
I couldn't run from reality

Now I knew
That I was no longer sure of anything
I didn't know what to believe anymore

Feeling lost
As I never had before
Having nowhere to go
I felt completely disconnected
From world.

O.......M.........G

:O This is a really deep emotional piece! Your really talented.

kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: ":O This is a really deep emotional piece! Your really talented."

Thank you soo much. It actually about how i was feeling at time. I was depressed at time.

Ur poem was so good!

Scott wrote: "Ur poem was so good!"

Thanks!

Jenia. wrote: "kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: ":O This is a really deep emotional piece! Your really talented."

Thank you soo much. It actually about how i was feeling at time. I was depressed at time."


I'm so sorry to hear that. Your poem was really great though.

Great poem

Jay wrote: "Great poem"

Thanks

i hope you win the contest!

Scott wrote: "i hope you win the contest!"

Thanks! I let you know if i do.

Jenia. wrote: "Scott wrote: "i hope you win the contest!"

Thanks! I let you know if i do."
Kk We all are anticipating when u win!

Scott wrote: "Jenia. wrote: "Scott wrote: "i hope you win the contest!"

Thanks! I let you know if i do."
Kk We all are anticipating when u win!"

Thanks! By way i posted new story, it called without you, if you intrested

Awesome poem

Jenia. wrote: "Scott wrote: "Jenia. wrote: "Scott wrote: "i hope you win the contest!"

Thanks! I let you know if i do."
Kk We all are anticipating when u win!"

Thanks! By way i posted new story, it called witho..."
I'll check it out.

Thanks to everyone reading the poem, this poem made the semi finalist in the contest :)

Jenia. wrote: "Thanks to everyone reading the poem, this poem made the semi finalist in the contest :)"

Congrats! You deserve it :D

Congrats!! I'm so proud!