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message 1: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
(((Roleplay)))
A small camp sits in the woods. There are few Phoenix members in it since the great battles.


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Firewing came in with a group of other Phoenix warriors. They were caring a Windwhisper tribe girl by the name of white leaf.


message 3: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Hey Firewing!" Coal came up to him. "Was this girl with anyone?" He pointed to White Leaf. "You know, like the loners?"


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"Ya acutually. That one we really don't like that we've been chasing for a, while, Blast, I think's her name. And that one with the red eyes, Fira I think. You know don't the other clans hate loners a much as we do?" Firewing reported.


message 5: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
A young child runs up. "Why do we hate loners?" he asks, eyes huge in his thin face.


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"Because they're unloyal to any tribe and can never be trusted. Because they are so arrogant that they think one deserves theyre loyalty; they're soo arrogant that no tribe meets their standards not even one boyle of stoned and fire likes ours, not even one that burns like fire and is reborn from theee ashes like a phoenix." Firewing testified.


message 7: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
The child was led away by his mother. Coal grinned. "I don't think those two loners will after this White Leaf."


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" They will always be arrogant, sir. They will try to firm a longer army to get revenge for her our whose yet cooperate with her clean to seek revenge for her. Or we may have been doing them a favor the one w caught seemed pet pale when we busted up the party for all we know they had been attacking her." Firewing testified.


message 9: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Good." Coal stands up and walks forward to examine White Leaf. "What shall we do with her?" He asks quietly to Firewing. "I wonder what the Phoenix will decide."


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"The Phoenix Lords always surprise us." Firewing agreed.


message 11: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
Meanwhile...
Blast watches from the woods, hearing every word. She smiles. No one beat her in unseen movement, not even Fira. Fira is far back in the woods. She comes up to her and says, "Fira, we have to wait after the Phoenix Lords decide. Then White Leaf wouldn't be as guarded and we can get her out."


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"Should we get any help? Theres enough people who love that they'll notice quickly. They'll notice and if w somehow fail our end up needing their help we'll be blamed." While Blast may have ben the quiet one Fira was the smart, logical one.


message 13: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Well, if we tell them, they'll just blame us for losing White Leaf and kill us before blundering in these woods and getting captured or killed by Phoenix warriors." Blast said. "It's best to wait. The choosing will happen right before nightfall. White Leaf will be tied up in a cave so she won't run away before accepting her new role. There are no guards then so we can get her out."


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"You don't think even polish our Airessa will help? Blast we're strong loners but theres a time when we need help and its when there are Phoenix involved out lives at stake if we don't succeed and the life of a girl we know." Fira had an entire speech of comebacks I'm her head to convince Blast. It would take a while and it'd be hard but Fira was stubborn.


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Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Yes, fine, but only people we can rely on and we go after dark." Blast says, surprising Fira.


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"That was easy," Fira mumbles under breath, surprised.


message 17: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments Cici wrote: ""Because they're unloyal to any tribe and can never be trusted. Because they are so arrogant that they think one deserves theyre loyalty; they're soo arrogant that no tribe meets their standards n..."

(((Disloyal.)))


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(((theyre humans of the pheonix tribe who cares about their grammer)))


message 19: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((Sorry. I'm an editor at heart. Really. Though I'd rather be an authoress… ANYway, you're right. Who the cookies CARES about their grammar?!!)))


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(((even if u r a girl I think its just author not authoress sry I have the wierdest quirks like one thing wont bug me but something VERY similar will)))


message 21: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((No, it's a real word. Look it up in the dictionary. I thought the same thing!!! =] )))


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(((wierd)))


message 23: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((Yep!)))


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(((well editors r cool too)))


message 25: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (last edited Apr 26, 2012 05:26PM) (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((Yeah. True, dat.)))


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(((wats "dat")))


message 27: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments White Leaf awoke tied up in a damp, dark cave. Her silver hair blew in her eyes. Yet, she didn't scream through her gag. Instead, she…laughed.
"Oh my gosh, isn't it ironic?" she whispered, though no one could hear her, even if someone had been with her.


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"shhh..." A voice whispered in her head it wasnt her own voice it was soft and melodic.


message 29: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments She shut her mouth. Fear clouded her eyes.


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"its all right. I'm a friend. A friend you may meet soon." The voice seemed to soothe her mind. She felt calm. Noyhing coild happen to her. Everything was alright.


message 31: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments A friend, she thought.


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"Now pretend you are sleeping. Wait for your friends. Do not speak unless you wish for torture." The voice warned.


message 33: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments Slowly, White Leaf lowered her head, as in a daze. She closed her eyes, made her breathing slow and calm. She fell asleep*.



*(((For real. Haha.)))


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(((lol)))

"She STILL hasn't woke up. If she nvr wakes up we'll nvr worm anything out of her. " a rough voice growled.
"Just as I predicted." Said a woman far away from the camp at the old shrine.


message 35: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"We should wake her up soon." A new voice said. "Don't the lords want her?"


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"We will, when she has to go see them, smart one." the first voice said.


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Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Oh, sorry sir." The speaker of the voice scurried away.


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The first voice left with loud footfalls.


message 39: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
Cici wrote: "Firewing came in with a group of other Phoenix warriors. They were caring a Windwhisper tribe girl by the name of white leaf."
(((u know, white leaf is in Sariah's tribe, not my :)


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(((o well she was in the windwhisper camp wasnt she?)))


message 41: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
(((i don't know if she was or not. Besides, does the old lady at the shrine belong to the Phoenix tribe?)))


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((((maybe :D))))


message 43: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
Later when the sun is just above the horizon. The second voice returns. "We were supposed to bring her, right?" It said, sounding anxious.


message 44: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((Hiya, people of awesomeness. I have returned!)))



Suddenly, White Leaf woke up--screaming. She had had a dream, a nightmare, and now she could do nothing but disobey the order for silence from the voice in her head.


(((I know, I'm evil--I LIKE making my characters scream!!!)))


message 45: by Geneva, monsters forever (last edited Apr 27, 2012 04:43PM) (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"Ah-ha, she's awake!" Coal came in the cave. "Feeling good, princess?" he asked, smiling evilly. "Even if you aren't, your ceremony is soon."


message 46: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments "Eat ashes," she said coldly. She had finally managed to rid herself of her gag.


message 47: by Geneva, monsters forever (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
"I see you have an attitude, princess." Coal said after he finally stopped laughing. "Now, you two, help me get her to the ceremonial cave." He beckoned to a pair of heavyset men.


message 48: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments "What do *you* want from me?" she sneered.



(((By the way, asterisks [*] mean italics.)))


message 49: by Geneva, monsters forever (last edited Apr 27, 2012 05:27PM) (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 719 comments Mod
((Ok, just get a random watcher to make comments and stuff cuz all of the Phoenix tribe will be there.))

"Me? I don't want anything from you. The Phoenix Lords do, however." Coal answered. "Ah, here we are." He stopped in front of a cave with a carven red bird over the enterance.


message 50: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 379 comments (((Craven? Carven. Right?)))



"And they are…?" she asked fiercely.


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