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I just wrote this when I had stomach flu that's why it's so lame and bad. BTW the I Solemnly Swear is a fanfic in fanfiction.net....
Here goes....

Writing is simple
Yet addicting and powerful
Writing differs
Whether romance or humor

'Tis never too young
Nor too old nor just right
For writing's for all
Old and child alike

I started nine
Fanfiction's the style
Never wilted my interest
In Harry Potter sets


James love Lily
My favorite story
I Solemnly Swear
About Marauders, go dare (Lame ryt?)

I suck at poetry
This one's the proof
So go comment and tell me
Is my career going to poof!?

Nice poem.

I think it's good, and I write poetry on the daily basis. Writing is my life.

I liked it! The last stanza is very funny because it's not true at all! Your poetry deff does NOT suck and this poem proves that

Cool poem

funny poem

You should change the title, it's really good not super lame.

REALLY? *hope!*

I wrote it without erasures! really from my heart even though it's......it.

Beatrish *Anti-Twilight* *BornToBeAChaser*~~~ wrote: "I wrote it without erasures! really from my heart even though it's......it."
It's better than anything I could ever write.

MaGosh.....Thanks for all the good feedback, In FanFiction.net, no one reviews me like u do...XD

Beatrish *Anti-Twilight* *BornToBeAChaser*~~~ wrote: "MaGosh.....Thanks for all the good feedback, In FanFiction.net, no one reviews me like u do...XD"

Maybe they don't know real talent? Or they are jealous? Either way I liked your writing

^^

kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: "Beatrish *Anti-Twilight* *BornToBeAChaser*~~~ wrote: "MaGosh.....Thanks for all the good feedback, In FanFiction.net, no one reviews me like u do...XD"

Maybe they don't know real talent? Or they a..."

Some people are ignorant, the help was rejected by over 50 publishers and it's an international success.

Scott wrote: "kevinjonaslover.♥ wrote: "Beatrish *Anti-Twilight* *BornToBeAChaser*~~~ wrote: "MaGosh.....Thanks for all the good feedback, In FanFiction.net, no one reviews me like u do...XD"

Maybe they don't k..."

Wasn't Harry Potter rejected many times and look at it now? Haters gonna hate

XD

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Dunno if you'll like this but if you read it, feedback would be nice.