The Legend of Zelda RP discussion

This is one of the six temples located in Hyrule. It is the Temple of Time, where the Master Sword rested until the Hero of Time drew it from its pedistle. It also serves as the doorway to the Sacred Realm and the Chamber of the Sages.

Link's entrance to the Temple of Time broke the eerie silence. The sound his boots made when they made contact with the chilly tile bounced off of every wall. Ahead of him was an empty pedestal with text inscribed on it. Link got closer to it and found out that it read, "Ye who owns 3 Spiritual Stones stand with the Ocarina of Time and play the Song of Time." Instantly, he remembered the melody that Zelda had taught him. He placed each Spiritual Stone in its proper place and played the Song of Time.

The tune was the key to the Door of Time. The solid stone door moved itself out of the way, revealing the legendary blade: the Master Sword. Link entered the room. It was fairly dark except for the sliver of light that peeked in through the window. Its golden glow flowed onto the Master Sword, cloaking it in light. One by one, little by little, Link cautiously went up the steps. He had a firm grip on the legendary sword. The Triforce that rested on his left hand radiated, offering even more proof that Link was the chosen hero. He lifted the sword up and held it proudly. As he did this, a powerful blue light beamed in the temple.

Link closed his eyes, experiencing a peculiar feeling. He had never felt this before. After a while, he opened his eyes, entering the world again as an adult.

((Is this better?))

(( Yes. Make your way to Termina in a logical order, please. ))

Giah's eyebrows raised as she saw the hero. He stood, holding the Master Sword, looking as proud as her sister said he was. She was hidden in the shadows-via a special talent she'd acquired-and for no good reason did she reveal herself to him.
Her brown hair fell off her shoulders as she sighed, leaning even farther back against the wall-if it was possible-and deeper into the shadows. Impa said to stay here, to wait for the hero. She wasn't told why, and well. Here he was, taking the sword. Hopefully to slay the evil here. Giah slipped out the harp she'd been given off her back and looked at it, her bandaged wrapped hands caressing the sides, careful not to play any note that the Hero would hear.

Nice entrence, but please don't engage Link. It will just slow everyone down. XD

((I won't. Just posted at the first topic I saw lol))