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let's say I write a storie about Sofia do I put it here or in Apollo's cabin?
Okay, so, I just wrote some fanfic, a short oneshot of the Percabeth reunion! Some of you may have seen it, but I thought the rest of you might enjoy reading it.My fanfic: "mark of athena" (i wish!) chapter 1: I get called Seaweed brain in from of all of Camp Jupiter
"Put down your weapons, now! Do you not know how to listen to your praetors?" shouted Reyna. "I will personally deal with the first person I see with a weapon in their hand in the next five seconds." There is a noticeable clatter of weapons following this statement. I smirk, Reyna sure knows how to keep them in line. Sound from the ship draws my attention back to it and the current situation. I hope no one from Camp Half-Blood gets any violent ideas. A gangplank is mechanically extending to the ground.
The first person to show up is a tall blonde kid. He looks to be about my age. Undoubtedly the famous Jason Grace...who's spot as praetor I've taken. Hope he doesn't get peeved about that, otherwise I have a feeling I'm going to be living a rerun of my fight with Thalia. The next person is the one who built this ship and contacted us, Leo Valdez. The impish grin on his features is apparent even from here. Suddenly two arms slip in between Leo and Jason, and force them to move aside. Then a face that has haunted me for the past 8 months is visible and approaching me at high speed.
"Perseus Allen Jackson! You seaweed brain!" I hear some derisive snickers. Those people are going to thoroughly get it later. And Annabeth is going to be asked to never use that in front of the Romans so freely. Talk about embarrassing. "How could you go missing for eight months without telling me if you were all right!" Annabeth shrieks, her grey eyes furious. I run towards her and pick her up into a hug, spinning her around despite her resistance. I can't help but laugh, I'm so glad to finally see her again.
"I tried! I swear on the River Styx I tried! Hera was blocking my Iris message connection!" Annabeth glares at me for a second longer, like she's trying to determine whether she believes me. As if I would swear on the River Styx if I didn't mean it! Then she gives me that smile that always makes me catch my breath.
"Fine. I forgive you." She rests her head on my chest, wrapping her arms tightly around my waist. Her next words are fervently whispered so only I can hear them. "I'm so glad you're okay. I was worried sick." I step back, placing my hand under her chin, gently raising her head so that I'm looking into her eyes.
"I doubt it was half as much as I was about you, Wise Girl," I say just as softly. Then I lean down and kiss her tenderly. She kisses me back so lovingly, and wraps her arms around my neck with an intense grip, like she's afraid I'll be spirited away again any second. I draw slightly back.
"I think that was an even better kiss than our first one," I say softly, a smirk on my face. "Oh shutup seaweed brain. Nothing could top that kiss," Annabeth replies, pulling me down for another kiss.
WRITE MORE!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!! YOU HIT THEIR PERSONALITIES SPOT ON!!!! DO MORE!!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Sydney wrote: "WRITE MORE!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!! YOU HIT THEIR PERSONALITIES SPOT ON!!!! DO MORE!!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!!"Oh. My. Gosh. I'm flabbergasted! And blushing! I never expected such an amazing reaction as I've gotten from you. I guess I might just have to write more! :D
Wow, thanks so much! :*) I might seriously add more to it....cept RR is such a troll that I haven't the foggiest as to where he'd take the story next....oh well, I'm gonna take creative license and just come up with something later! This should be fun. :)
chapter of book im writingJason
I wake up and gets dressed then grab my jacket and runs to school and a truck comes at me . i ran and everything was a blur and seconds later i was in my class everyone looking at me like what the. look in the window and my hair was blown back and i walk to my desk and grab my bag that i left yesterday and dig through and grab my comb and comb it up to make it spiky.my friend lizzy looks at me and says" what was with your hair" yeah what was with my hair" i i i don't know liz i was about to be hit by a truck and i ran and i saw the way to school in a matter of seconds "i whisper .she looks at me then laughs so hard that she falls back in her chair."Elizabeth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the teacher yells . oh ms crab apple ." yes ms Bernstein." ms barnstain scowls"its Ms barnstain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!."potato patoto"lizzy says smugly and crabapple crabs her arm and drags her to the principal office but before she does she says" class is dismissed."the class floods to the gym and all over ecept the hall with the vending machine.of course they did it works but no snacks fall out ever. i go over to and shake it and my hands spark and the snacks fall out and i grab some of them and stuff them in my bag" what no no yes yes i have super powers!!!!!!!" i jump up and down and the floor gets a dent oops my bad .i grin then run to the mall in seconds after slamming into buldings a couple times. my hair was blown back Again so i pat it down.i dig in my jacket and take out my phone and text zane about my day every detail and he did the same.
Oh no. I could never. It's your story and I think it should be only yours. Trust me it'll be worth it when you're done. You'll get an amazing feeling.
Goten if you want to be a writer than you need to challenge yourself by writing different types of characters. You don't need a girl you just need to push yourself harder and harder. C'mon you got this.
I know. If you can do a POV for Jason then you obvi can't to a POV for Lizzy. Just make it about Jason then
ZaneI woke up to the sound of the beetles likeZ every morning and got up and took a shower and when i got out and i tripped , i had my eyes closed then i open them and i was floating in the air"what the."i flail in the air and electricity shoots out of my finger tips hitting the walls and lights and the electricity goes out . i fall to the ground" Fuck what just happened" the electricity comes back on and and i make my bed after getting dressed and eat breakfast and run to school .i get knocked down and see a blur run into class"this day just keeps on get better" i pick my stuff up and when i get to class Ms. Barnstain was dragging Elizabeth out and people flooded out including Jason. Great!!!!!!! Jason always late was there before me. I am told class is dismissed then i run and use the restroom .i come out and the vending machine had snacks around it i pick one up and flames spark out of my hands and i drop the flaming funions bag and run i pull the fire alarm from 5 feet away by just thinking of doing it .school was canceled a few miinutes later and i ran to the park and got a text from Jason and he had a super power filled day to and i text him back about my day
JasonI wake up and gets dressed then grab my jacket and runs to school and a truck comes at me . i ran and everything was a blur and seconds later i was in my class everyone looking at me like what the. look in the window and my hair was blown back and i walk to my desk and grab my bag that i left yesterday and dig through and grab my comb and comb it up to make it spiky.my friend lizzy looks at me and says" what was with your hair" yeah what was with my hair" i i i don't know liz i was about to be hit by a truck and i ran and i saw the way to school in a matter of seconds "i whisper .she looks at me then laughs so hard that she falls back in her chair."Elizabeth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the teacher yells . oh ms crab apple ." yes ms Bernstein." ms barnstain scowls"its Ms barnstain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!."potato patoto"lizzy says smugly and crabapple crabs her arm and drags her to the principal office but before she does she says" class is dismissed."the class floods to the gym and all over ecept the hall with the vending machine.of course they did it works but no snacks fall out ever. i go over to and shake it and my hands spark and the snacks fall out and i grab some of them and stuff them in my bag" what no no yes yes i have super powers!!!!!!!" i jump up and down and the floor gets a dent oops my bad .i grin then run to the mall in seconds after slamming into buldings a couple times. my hair was blown back Again so i pat it down.i dig in my jacket and take out my phone and text zane about my day every detail and he did the same.
Zane
I woke up to the sound of the beetles likeZ every morning and got up and took a shower and when i got out and i tripped , i had my eyes closed then i open them and i was floating in the air"what the."i flail in the air and electricity shoots out of my finger tips hitting the walls and lights and the electricity goes out . i fall to the ground" Fuck what just happened" the electricity comes back on and and i make my bed after getting dressed and eat breakfast and run to school .i get knocked down and see a blur run into class"this day just keeps on get better" i pick my stuff up and when i get to class Ms. Barnstain was dragging Elizabeth out and people flooded out including Jason. Great!!!!!!! Jason always late was there before me. I am told class is dismissed then i run and use the restroom .i come out and the vending machine had snacks around it i pick one up and flames spark out of my hands and i drop the flaming funions bag and run i pull the fire alarm from 5 feet away by just thinking of doing it .school was canceled a few miinutes later and i ran to the park and got a text from Jason and he had a super power filled day to and i text him back about my day
Hey Goten. Cool story by the way but I saw some cussing. It's really good and I don't want to waste a good story. Could you edit that out please?
You can't? No worries. I'll see what I can do. Just please keep it in mind. Keep writing though!
I (who is Oliver) found Nico in the underworld and asked " are you dead? or a son of Hades? i am"
" me too" nico answered " i hate this guy called Percy he got our sister killed"
" i hate him too"
i'll think of some more
You're telling me, friend. It's always the first half. I can't ever write the ending but maybe twice. XD Sligjt exaggeration, but that's only because I start so many things that I'm bound to finish a few.
I wrote a story for English homework, but I left it at school and term just ended, and I am going to a different school so In might never see my story again. It's called 'Steve and the goblet of Zeus'
The tribulations of Clark Kent paragraph 1 and 2" Master Bruce? What are you doing? You just got to bed. It's morning,and you don't have any buisness as Bruce Wayne to deal with this early." The skinny British butler asked the young fit man hurrying down the stairs to the grandfather clock in the study. He turned to the British man and said"Alfred today is the day that Clark told me about."
Alfred cocked his confused" What day Master Bruce?"
Bruce smiled as he slid the glass in the clock to reveal a secret entrance" The day I began to train him into the man he is today.
Bruce made his way down the long set of stairs inside the gigantic cave, and headed towards the glass case holding the suit with the resemblance of a bat on a mannequin. Alfred hurried after him extremely confused" Sir, what do you mean?"
Bruce took the suit off the mannequin, and then turned towards the butler"You've heard of time travel haven't you Alfred."
Alfred nodded with a smirk" Of course sir but that's just fiction. Isn't it?"
Bruce smiled at him" My best friend was a super powered alien."
Alfred nodded" Good point sir."
Bruce put on the suit then quickly made his way to a small jet shaped like a bat" It's time for Batman to make a early appearance in Metropolis,and to meet the teenage Clark Kent." The plane then started and was soon bursting through the caves tunnels until it reached the skies."







Anyway, it's the same steps with the long fan fics So... yeah. Thanks guys and request here.