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I looked desperatly around me. The walls were slowly closing in, cutting off my air, and pressing uncomfortably against me. My breath grew shorter, vision slowly going black...
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I looked desperatly around me. The walls were slowly closing in, cutting off my air, and pressing uncomfortable against me. My breath grew shorter, vision slowly going black. I tried my hardest not to go, not to give up. Where was he? I called out for help again. I knew it wouldn't do me any good, just make it worse. I heard running. "Ana? Ana! ANA," I heard them yell. My brown hair fell in front of my face. My vision finally goes black right as I feel cold air rush around me. "Ana," I hear my sister yell.
I woke up to see the blue and purple walls of our room. "Huh? What happened," I mumbled. I see Kayla looking at me. "What did I do this time," I muttered. "You have got to stop following the first glittery thing you see. Sage is trying to catch you," Kayla said. I blushed. "Sorry," I whispered. Kayla soon hugged me. "I don't want to loose you again," she whispered. I remembered the day I "died" and hugged her back. "I'm not that stupid, besides if it gets close to that, I'll just whip out a gun," I said with a smile.

(LOL! XD! SONIC, FROMM NOW ON STAY AWAY FROM ANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
I lookked desperatly around me. The walls were slowly closing in, cutting off my air, and pressing uncomfortably against me. My breath grew shorter, vision slowly going black...all of a sudden, the walls had stopped.
"What th-Sonic!" I yelled happily.
"How's it goin' Kayla?" he asked, "You'd better go find Ana."
"ANA'S HERE TOO!? SON OF A NUTCRACKER!" I bolted out of the room, then ran into a large robot, "You've got to be fudgin' kidding me."
It aimed a large gun at my head, fired, and missed. I whirled around and gave it a good kick in the head.
"Take that you piece of junk!" I snapped victoriously, then began to run down the hallway again.
Suddenly, I reached a space where the walls were sunk in...and still sinking! Before I could say anything, someone dragged me a little farther down the hall.
"What the fud-of course it's Sage," I muttered, "Get away from me you jerk!"
He smirked, but I quickly knocked it off as I socked him in the face.
"Ow! Dangit! Why do I always forget the Metarex part!?" I cursed.
Sage smacked me across the hall, then came closer, "Now how did you escape?"
"Hm...why wouldn't I tell you? Let's list the reasons shall we?" I spat bitterly.
Before he could respond, a blue blur crashed into him, "Kayla! Get Ana!"
I blinked stupidly for a second, then bolted towards the room, "Ana? Ana! ANA!"
I opened the door to the room and she fell out, unconscious, "Dangit! No wonder I don't feel good," I muttered, suddenly noticing how light headed I was.
Sonic suddenly walked up, "Do you need help?"
"No, it's not like I'm about to pass out or anything," I said sarcastically.
"Good thing Shadow came," Sonic replied happily.
"On the other hand, I think I can walk," I birhgtened, stood up, and fell back down, "Okay legs, really bad time to stop, WORKING!"
Sonic scooped Ana up, "HEY SHADOW!"
"What?" he growled.
I banged my head on the wall, "Just let me fall unconscious, just let me fall unconscious."
Shadow walked into the light. I smiled nervously and banged my head on the wall....hard.
"Why did you just hit your head?" Sonic asked.
"Uh...it...itched?" I nodded, "Yup, it itched."
Sonic smirked, "Are you sure? Because it seemed like-"
"SHUT UP!" I blushed.
Suddenly, I was flying into the air, "AAIIIEEE!!!"
I clenched my eyes shut and when I opened them, saw that Shadow was glaring at me, "That," Sonic chuckled.
I laughed nervously, "Uh...hehe. I think I'll just pass out now."
And I did.

really loved it! starting from "Just let me fall unconscious, just let me fall unconscious." to the very end I was laughing really hard that my brother was looking at me wierd but then i showed him and he started laughing. XD

XD! Nice. Lol

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