Writers Wanted!!! discussion

if you look closely; you can see the tears i've shed; you broke my heart mostly; but you're still in my head; i wanted us to last; longer than we did; it went away too fast; they say i'm just a kid; i look you down through and through; if only you still loved me; i'm in love with you; and you can't even see; no one can replace; the feeling in my chest; the pain is too hard to face; but im still trying my best...

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