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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I'll edit them on summer
A Lovely PastFool's Entertainment
Prologue to my novel
I have a few more on my profile but the first two are a couple of my poems, and the last speaks for itself lol :)
It does! Thank you Joe for liking one of mine btw :p I would've read through all of them but I got booted off after I posted mine :/
I have some writing but it isn't on this website. I am thinking about putting it on here though. Well, this is some of my work on Fictionpress:http://www.fictionpress.com/u/805502/...
Welcome ^_^ I like your second one as well. I had an experience somewhat like that... But no one told me not to in that kind of sense *shrug* it was a bad idea I'm over it. Got a new guy who is totally amazing ^_^
Haha good for you ^.^ I kinda wrote that after my second ex and i broke up, and I've been single since, and that was in October of 2010 xD
Sherri wrote: "Dude, I LOVE your ninja librarians avatar! So freaking awesome!!!"
Thanks! And I really liked the prologue you wrote.
Thanks! And I really liked the prologue you wrote.
Haha, thankies ^.^ I don't have anything past chapter 2 yet except random scenes *shakes head shamefully*
No shame, no shame. It was the same with me. When I was writing regularly, I would write bits and pieces at a time and then sort of combine them to make a cohesive whole. Plus my favourite things to write were action scenes and dialogue. The one thing I couldn't do was write a beginning. It was actually quite funny.
Lol yes well this writer's block has plagued me for almost a year now except for random scenes every now and again *sighs*
Hmm try think of your story as a movie. Make it a trailer for how you want it to play out and write it down. I did that and that helped me a lot when I was writing my book.
This is a little darker than my usual stuff, but its the only one I actually have typed out. I'd appreciate some criticism:)http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...
Hi my name is Ingrid. I am new and am hoping you could criticize or comment on my writing. here's the linkhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
you can also go to ingrid's writing after clicking the link to view all of my stories I have written
Ingrid wrote: "Hi my name is Ingrid. I am new and am hoping you could criticize or comment on my writing. here's the link
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
you can also go to ingr..."
Hi Ingrid! Welcome! I read two of your poems and really liked them! You have talent!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
you can also go to ingr..."
Hi Ingrid! Welcome! I read two of your poems and really liked them! You have talent!
I just posted my first story on GR and I would love you forever and ever if you would read it and comment with feedback. It is called THE KIDNAPPER'S GAME. There is only one chapter so far, but I plan on continuing. You can get to it from my profile. Thank you sooooo much!
Sarah wrote: "I just posted my first story on GR and I would love you forever and ever if you would read it and comment with feedback. It is called THE KIDNAPPER'S GAME. There is only one chapter so far, but I p..."
Sarah, your profile is private so I can't access your writing.
ETA: Found it. It's pretty good (a lot like how The Golden Compass had the Gobblers. And of course the mash up with the Hunger Games.)
I'm not gonna put any feedback yet, 'cause it's too short, but it has great promise.
Sarah, your profile is private so I can't access your writing.
ETA: Found it. It's pretty good (a lot like how The Golden Compass had the Gobblers. And of course the mash up with the Hunger Games.)
I'm not gonna put any feedback yet, 'cause it's too short, but it has great promise.
What does ETA mean?And thank you for reading! I am glad you like it so far! I have actually never read the Golden Compass, but I'd like to soon. Anyway, thanks again Lafon!
ETA stands for Estimated Time of Arrival. We computer types use it for way more than that though. In this case it means that after I posted the comment I figured out a way to find your story.
katnuto wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...this is a peice i just wrote and wanted your thoughts"
It's pretty good!I can't wait for you to begin:P
Julius wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...Who will dare?"
Is this the part where we fall over ourselves to proclaim our heroism by CLICKING ON THAT LINK? O.O
I just added Chapter 4 to my story The Kidnapper's Game so please read!Chapter 4
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...






