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Jan 06, 2009 01:46PM

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"The girl looked at her father scared and suspicious of what was going on. Her father climbed up the rocky walls, never looking back. She tried to climb onto the rock, but slipped back. Her hand flew through the air, and she caught a hand. Her father held her and said looking into her eyes with no expression, "We part now." Her heart beat faster than the wind, and her mind pushed the words back, not wanting them. The words she was afraid of hearing in both dreams and life had been spoken. She turned back each step seperating her from the father she had once loved. Each step was heavy with the tears and memories she shed upon the ground. Her father moved away too, and tried not to look back. But he did. That was his mistake. He saw a girl who had grown up and didn't need him. He let his hands slip away from the rock and fell to the depths below." 166 words. 100 words than.
Sorry, Paige. it smells good, and tastes amazing with creamer ... ahhh ... coffee.... *takes in heavenly scent*
I know how you feel, Tink. I think that coffee is pretty gross as well. I much prefer monster as a source of caffine. Or ginger ale. mmmmm gingerale.....
♫♪♫Rayana or Ray-Ray♫♪♫ wrote: "I dislike it..
With a passion of a thousand volcanoes exploding spontaeneously..."
OMG!!! That's great!!! Could I possibly borrow the phrase? I know just who would say that sort of thing, and who they would say it about. Seth might know what I'm talking about...with Constance... and the king...
or even... no *shudder* not Tisina. that would be disastrous! A thousand suddenly rage-filled humans...
With a passion of a thousand volcanoes exploding spontaeneously..."
OMG!!! That's great!!! Could I possibly borrow the phrase? I know just who would say that sort of thing, and who they would say it about. Seth might know what I'm talking about...with Constance... and the king...
or even... no *shudder* not Tisina. that would be disastrous! A thousand suddenly rage-filled humans...

AN AWEOME PARTY!!! YA BABY!!!
in the party room from 6:25 on
(California time) Please attended!!!!!!!

*Picks up diet coke and almond* Eww! *Dials number for Jolly Jovials* Doesn't make sense but who cares? I need a maid!!!! *Looks at Rayana and Paige* Why was there a food fight? *Nails a sign that says "Hat day is Tommorow"*
*Puts on cowboy hat*

Drat...missed hat day again
Hey Divya can can you make a hat-week instead? Always seems like I am a day behind.
Hey Divya can can you make a hat-week instead? Always seems like I am a day behind.
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