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Jan 06, 2009 02:10PM
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As the sun set it cast an orange glow about the land. Everything was quiet and still. It felt as if nothing could ruin the peace that the rolling hills and swaying grass seemed to instill upon the sole. As always in this universe the peace could not and would not last. The ground began to shake, an earth shattering boom emitted from over head. Out of the sky flew a ball of fire. It hit the ground in a cloud of smoke and ash. For several minuets nothing happened then from out of the crater came a monster more horrifying than you can imagine skin as dark and night eyes a sickly crimson color. The devilish monster gazed around for a moment then I slithered into the obis of night without a trace without a sound and without the knowledge of anyone.
good bad ugly?
your mom, ha ha ha jk that was really good! like amazing!
yes i really do! i am done with the third chapter!
yes! what else would have a thrid chapter vivian?
