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message 1: by Cheyenne (last edited Jun 15, 2012 09:28PM) (new)

Jun 15, 2012 09:27PM

I just wrote the very beginning of my first YA action. It's a thriller. Problem is, I desperately need good, solid feedback. Please, please, just read a little, and if it interests you, comment. I want to know if it's any good! Thank you all!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

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