Writers Everywhere discussion

Well these are the first chapters of my new ebook 'At the point of dusk'. It's the first in a triology (I wanted to write something short for a challange and ended up making a triology.. how typical :P )
Anyway, feedback is welcome :) If anyone likes to read the rest of the chapters I can give a coupon for the ebook :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...

Wow! Congratulations!

Thanks a lot :) Though this books is self published on smashwords. My first novel Exogenesis was published through traditional means :) I have the first chapter to that as well.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

It's very cool that you were able to self publish! :) Very neat!

Congratulations!
Is it expensive to self-publish?

Thanks!!! Smashwords is totally free! And it isn't too hard either :)