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Title: Givra Daughter Of Thor

Text: In the heavens a place called, Asgard where the Gods and demi-gods lived peacefully, in a huge pure white castle, sat a tall, muscular man in armour that a viking might wear, he held a huge hammer by his side, this man was known as Thor. He was sitting on his throne, his, love that was known as Jane Foster sat beside him, they were the rulers of Asgard.
Although there was only one thing, that everyone knew about, they're daughter Givra, she was tall, she looked more like her mother than her father, tanned brown hair, but she had deep blue eyes.

So anyway, skip the parents and get to the kid, Givra was walking down the halls of the castle, going to visit her favorite person, not her grandparents, not her parents. It was her uncle, Loki. Sure he was kind of bossy, but he was fun, and he was nice, not like her parents. She thought they were mean, always making her do these things called, "Chores" when she had free time, not like Loki.

Right when she walked in the room he had to stay in, she didn't know why he had to, but everytime he tried to leave, he would be shocked till he either passed out or backed away, the only way to let him out is only if someone actually did something to the powers on the room, like if she said, I let Loki, in room of punishments, out of his restrainments, to roam around Asgard freely then he wouldn't be shocked.

Givra walked in, smiling, "Hi uncle Liko!" Loki looked up, confused, he was tall like her father, but he was skinny, black haired and dark eyes and pale, Givra always thought he was weird, but he was actually cool, he seemed to make a weak smile, he then shook his head, "Isn't my name, but I do like the name though..."

"Opps! Sorry, glad you like the name though!" Givra cried happily, walking over and sitting beside him, small compared to him.

((Not finished yet :P ))