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elemental animals volume one


Chapter 1
Death of the wolf shaman

Once upon a time there was a planet with no humans’ just animals so it was a lush green land but there were also barren wastelands and snowy glaciers.
Everyone and everything was happy until one day a new tribe came along and they called themselves “the dragonus clan”. They thought that if they killed the leader of the wolf tribe, the wolf shaman, they could take all his powers for themselves and plunge the planet into slavery and war. The wolf shaman was the global peace keeper and he said a long time ago “When I die my soul which consists of all the elements will split into individual elements and fly into stones and it will be my tribe’s duty to hand one stone to every species so that all the animals will have a different element. My tribe will have darkness but they must fulfil the prophecy of killing the most evil animal on utopimalia, the dragons.” So the when the dragons killed the shaman the ran off and hid in their volcano fort but little did they know that the wolves had gathered up their things and set upon the great adventure but the dragons laid out a few... well... obstacles for the wolves to get past...


Chapter 2
The almighty elephants

The wolves thought a nice place to go to would be the hot, dry plains so they went there in search of elephants. The most important wolves in the tribe are: Tomba the son of the shaman (now also the leader), Lola Tomba’s wife, Kala the general, Mato the doctor and Lara the child minder (a tribe can’t be a tribe without children can it?).
They are trekking through hot plains when Kala shouts to Tomba “I think I see some creatures in the distance!” and Tomba replies “yes I see them too they are elephants but behind them dragons are holding them hostage, everyone take cover me, Kala and the army are going to save the elephants and give them the stone of earth”.


Chapter 3
The deadly dragon twins

“Now Kala tell the army this plan, we are going to use the power of darkness to turn into shadows and sneak up on the dragons then slash them with shadow claw, is that clear?” Said Tomba and Kala replied “yes sir, sir!” But when they were about a meter away a puff of smoke made them fall out of shadow form and the two mysterious black and white dragons seemed to turn into a ying and yang symbol and the first dragon chimed “I am huff!” and the second sang “I am puff!” and then the both yelled “and we are the deadly dragon twins!”. “Forget what I said fire at will!” yelled Tomba but then the dragons said “well that may be what you think but you will have to come over here and kill us on your own!” then Tomba said “you took our leader you took my father and therefore I will come and kill you with my very own claws!” then something happened that no one expected the dragons started spinning very fast and turned into a giant ying and yang symbol but Tomba still knew how to defeat them he teleported behind huff and slashed him right through the heart and puff screamed our souls are connected if he dies I die” then after the Battle he asked Honka (chief of the elephants) if he would take the stone of earth and join the wolves on their epic journey and the answer was yes.










Chapter 4
The dark assassins
Tomba jogged his memory and thought were should we go next? Then he remembered his old friends the parakeets from the lush, green rain forests. He shouted to his pack “we have to find the whales and persuade them to join us!”
So the great wolf tribe resumed their great journey through the Animalian savannah. They just got sight of the ocean but then two large spotted leopards with flaming red eyes ran over to them and said “we are under the control of the dragon assassins and we shall kill you!” Tomba said I will just have to take you guys on myself” and slashed one leopard right across cheek. “MEOWW!” screeched the leopard and then both leopards took on Honka their broad shouldered big hearted elephant companion. One of the leopards was unlucky enough to land on one of Honka’s sharp tusks and Kala yelled “One down one to go!”
Tomba said to the tribe “I have a plan run as fast as you can down to the water’s edge and stop then stay still!”
That is what they did and the leopard fell in and slowly fell to his death being unable to swim.
Chapter 5
Oceanus the sea tyrant

The wolves got down to the coast and talked whales through what the situation was and the chief whale bellowed out “Oh I never knew about this. I will take our three biggest whales to carry you and we will look out for any danger!”
They had just caught sight of Tropo Island when a whale gave a warning call then the whale chief, Spurto said to Lola “There is a unidentified swimming object rising up toward the sun, watch the water it might be dangerous!” “OK I’ll tell Tomba” so Lola told him but before she could say anything more a colossal dark blue dragon sprang up and a little cub fell but Lara caught him. The great blue dragon said “I am Oceanus the Sea Tyrant. FEEL MY WRATH!”...




Chapter 6
Whales ‘n’ wolves

“Oceanus is a blue dragon so he must shoot water instead of fire and since he is a sea tyrant we must aim for the gills” commanded Kala and the army replied with an agreeing bark. Lara asked Spurto if she and the pups could get another whale for her and the pups but Spurto asked her “why?” and Lara explained “me and the pups must get to land as soon as possible so that the pups can live!” After the explanation a whale called Humphrey took them to the rain forest.
Kala and Tomba hatched a plan, one of them was to jump on one wing and the other was to jump on the other then they would each slash a gill and then shoot a spinning shadow ball in his chest so they did that but Oceanus just laughed and Kala and Tomba at the same time said “Huh, what’s going on?” Oceanus said while laughing that “only a sea animal can defeat me and you wolves aren’t sea animals are you now?” “But we can still defeat you with our trusty friends the whales, whales take the stone of water and shoot a hurricane at him!” said Tomba, and Spurto shot a hurricane at the head and it fell off an Oceanus was done for good




End of book one !


hope you liked it PS the title is ELEMENTAL ANIMALS VOLUME ONE:EVIL IS RISING (ICOULDNT UNDER LINE;)