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Johnny B. Goode sat on the corner of a street, playing his guitar with his hat out for tips. He just needed a few more dollars, then he could be on his way...

Autumn the corner and bumped into a boy ((How old are you)) playing his guitar, she had heard him from far away but hadent reconize it was so close, that was weird, she always seemed to get things more easily than other people. The wind was cold and played with her hair, she rubed her arms together trying to stay warm, his music was good she could see he was playing for money. Autumn took out an old and soft 20 dollar bill that was about to rip appart, sitting down beside him she offered it.

((Third person. And I think he's Seventeen.))

((Hey?))

((Sorry I had to wash dishes))

((Can you answer my character?))

((You RP in third person, not first.))

((What))

((?))

((You are supposed to RP in third person, not First. You say that character's name, not I.))

((Oh okay sorry I never rp like that I will fix it))

((Have you ever RPed before?))

((Like that?))

((Yes! That's right.))

Johnny stopped playing and looked up at her. He looked down at the money, took it tentatively in his hand, and looked at her again. It's obvious that he was speechless. He tried to get some words out, but they just came out as stutters.

Autumn looked at him surprised by his expression and asked him
-Whats wrong?-

Johnny looked at the money in his hand, and back at her. "This... this... this is a lot!" He finally managed.

She looked at him worriedly,
-I am sorry, its the least I have, what do you mean is a lot?-She asked him surprised, it was only 20 bucks?

Johnny stood up. "The least you have is twenty bucks? You must be rich! I haven't had more than a dollar since... a long time! How did you get so much money?"

Autumn stood up with him and looked shocked.
-Well my parents they divided there money between me and ....well...my..ummm...brother, in their will-She told him
-You really have only have a dollar for a long time? Why? How did you lived with that??-She asked him surprised.

((I am not so good with english grammar sorry. My first language is spanish. How do you spell -will-?))

((Like that. But you talk in Quotation marks, "like this."))

"Because twenty dollars is a small fortune! You could buy a small house for that!" Johnny still looked awestruck. Where did this girl come from? Where did she find such riches? And how does she not know that herre, money is a very rare find, and ten cents gets you a long ways in life?

Autumn looked at him and explained
".A house with 20 dollars!!!????I am not from here so I guess its strange to have that much money. But are you really saying thats how it is here, should I take care of my money than??" She asked him schocked to hell.

((Sorry the rp I have less rules, so I dont really know))

((These aren't rules, these are just standard format.))

Johnny nodded. He looked around, then whispered to her, "I'm leaving on an Adventure, to the Lonesome Road. I want to get to the other side. Will you go with me?"

((Oh okay, sorry didnt see your post thats why I took so long, my computer isisnt working so good))
Autumn was surprised to hear something like that out of nowhere and she probably guessed that he asked her more for her money, but she didnt care she always liked adventure and maybe she could find her brother in the way.
"I have always loved adventure, why not?"She told him with a little smile

((So what do you think of my rp so far?))

((You just need some practice.))

Johnny smiled, picking up his guitar and standing. "All right. I was going to leave in a few days, but because of you, we can leave right away."

Autumn smiled at him and said
"Well then I am happy I helped, sure witch way now?" She asked him.

((Okay, if someday you would like to check out my writing and leave a comment I would love it (: ))

((All right!))

"Well, I gotta stop by home and get a few things, and then we can head for the crossroads."

((Thanks!!))

"Great" Autumn said following him down the street.

Johnny stopped when he got to yet another shack that had been repaired with cardboard, cans, and broken metal. He opened what appeared to be a door and grabbed a bag from inside it. He closed it again and swung the bag over his shoulder. "All right, let's go."

She looked at the shack in surprise.
"You live here?" She asked him but not in a mean way sortof in a amazed way.
"Is that all you have? That great now the trip wont be heavy. I dont have anything except some cash, so now were?-She asked him

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Johnny nodded. "Yeah, everyone lives in a place like this. Look around, that's all there is." He nodded. "Yeah, this is all I own, so let's go!" He made his way to the town gate.

((Did you read the READ THIS FIRST bit?))

((I sortof did I am sorry I just scaned it quick I cheked it out and I am gonna try to act more like it))

Autumn followed him just one step behind.
-What your name?-She asked him

((Oh. It has an important backstory...))

"Johnny. Johnny B. Goode, at your service, ma'am," he said, mock bowing.

((I know sorry))

"Nice to meet you Johnny B. My name is Autumn Brown" She said with a curtsey ((bad grammar?)) laughing a little, and then blushing.

((It's okay.))

"It is nice to meet you, Autumn Brown." Johnny smiled, then turned back to the gate. "Ready?"

She grinned at his smile and said
"Ofcourse"

Johnny nodded and looked around once more. "On my mark get ready to run..." when he saw no one was looking, he said "GO!" And started running.

Auumn wasent waiting for it, but just took the chance and sprintid behind him running as fast as she could, in a momment she was beside him and not daring to look back. "Where are we going?" She asked him.

((Where exactly are we?))

((Move to the Crossroads section.))

((Okay))