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Okanomi Я не понимаю, как это сделать ... Мне нужна помощь (okanomihonda) (?)


ᴀʀᴏᴛʜ [hiatus] (thelovelymsels) Izzy and Claire went there to chill down.
"Okay Oh my gosh izzy that was flipping scary! I don't want that ever to happen to us again at all! I think i'm crying and my mascare is getting ruin!" She sighed and cried into her best friends arms.

"Hush Claire it will be alright. We will get this settled I promise you we will. We just need to chill down for a bit."


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Taylor was sitting down by a tree, doodling in her notebook and eavesdropping on the two girls nearby. She noticed how aggravated they sounded, but easily withheld from interfering. Instead, she began to sketch them in her book.


ᴀʀᴏᴛʜ [hiatus] (thelovelymsels) Izzy sighed looking at her. "Who cares if your masacre is messed up claire. It's not like your a popular wannabe. We are the outcast and will always be them. But as long as we got each other we won't have to worry. We may be emo and stuff but that's not going to stop us from being who we are!" She grinned.


"Izzy you always know how to say the right things to cheer me up. Later when the mall is all cleaned up from the guy with the gun we should go find us some skinny jeans and some brand new converse. I can see both of ours are going to die by the end of this month." She laughed.

((hey ashlyn heard u are new here welcome to the group and im izzy or u can call me lizzy but nice to meet u to and hope u have fun here ;) ))


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((Hey. thank you!))

Taylor leaned forward over her drawing and stroked her pencil across the page. She finished drawing the first girl, and now she was working on the second one. Taylor always loved drawing. Anime was her style, which she was doing now, converting the pair of friends into characters.

She glanced up at the girls again, only to see that they were staring at her with twin looks of curiosity. Taylor flipped to a new page and pretended the drawing of them didn't exist.


ᴀʀᴏᴛʜ [hiatus] (thelovelymsels) ((Hey to you to. No problem. I just don't like seeing the new ppl of groups always becoming invisible. -__- that happen to me when i was newbie and it sucks so i'm here helping all the newbies of the groups so they don't become invisible anymore or have this happen))

Izzy giggled softly and looked at Claire. "Oh man we need a guy to hang with now. Wish my brother could but he's so young. Fifteen or i think it was elven don't cut it. I want a guy badly and so do you. So we will find one together. But has to fit our tastes. We are doing no jock. We can't have a jock boyfriend at all. Maybe a nerd or one of us and that's it." She grinned.


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Taylor opened her tote bag and fished her cell phone out of it. Her cousin Brooklyn had sent her three texts.

Come 2 the mall with me.

oh my god taylor, someone's shooting ppl at the mall. don't come.

taylor, are u ok?? i'm coming 2 find u.


She texted back:

I'm at the park.

There was no reply. Taylor was getting worried.


ᴀʀᴏᴛʜ [hiatus] (thelovelymsels) Claire sighed and looked back at izzy. "It was best if we did stick here. OH I want those converse so badly. I need a new pair of neon's or reds. But Izzy you think the people in the mall will be alright? I'm scared." She cried into her shoulder. "After how your mom was a drug dealer and then died of drug overdose and your dad being an alcolholic. Then he dying of alcolholic posioning." She sighed and cried again.


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Eventually, Taylor stood up, grabbed her tote bag and headed for the mall, wondering about her cousin. She mounted her dark blue bike and pedaled off to the mall to see where Brook was.


ᴀʀᴏᴛʜ [hiatus] (thelovelymsels) izzy looked back at her. "Shush Claire everything will be alright. I promise you I seriously think it best if we just stay here for overnight." She sighed.


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In the pouring rain, Ryder stands by himself, in his black leather jacket and jeans. He waits for the girls to catch up. Tessa still wasn't to be found. He pulled down his hood and his red hair stuck to his head. He felt better though when he could see all directions.


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Dylan dragged a half alive Tessa across the park ground. she was alone he thought no one will look for her he left a trail of blood on the ground


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The rain soaked her shirt up, she took it off, and put her jacket on.
"She's not here, but I found this.."she said lending him the letter.


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She saw black spots all over the place, "is that-"she poke it with her finger.
"blood.."she gasped.


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She pulls out her sweater and puts it on


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Tessa awoke slightly "Go to Hell." she muttered and closed her eyes again

"Oh i plan on it" Dylan threw her over his shoulder and took her under a tree


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"Hm." Ryder jumped back when he say a trail of blood. "Shit." He was no stranger to blood, but he knew that was a lot.


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She cracked her knuckles and followed the bloody track, and tip toed to the tree there where hiding......
"We are not going to hurt you...."she pulled a hand into the tree and felt someone's blood.
"tessa?"


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She sees the blood and she rembers what happened to her


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Tessa laid dieing under the tree in a puddle of blood already soaked in rain


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She stares at Dyan and then at Tessa.
"You monster!"


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((g2g))


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Ryder's nose wrinkles at the blood. So many bad memories. He pushes them out of his head, but fingers a knife in his jacket pocket. Ryder stands behind Avery, under the tree


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As tears fell to the ground she felt Ryder's breathe untop her.


message 26: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 26, 2012 12:03PM) (new)

Dylan gives a wicked smile "so the run begins" He threw Tessa over his shoulder and look off running throught the park doging trees and animals


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((Sorry in delayed. GR mobile is slow.))


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((its ok))


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She starts runing and grabs her gun she starts shooting but he was to far way. She knelt to the ground and sobs.


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Ryder runs after him. He wasn't super athletic and skinny jeans sucked, but he was skinny and tall so it balanced out. Ryder grabbed Avery's hand and pulled her with him.


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She gasped and swiftly got up, and ran at his side.

"he is to far away.."


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"Holy crap." Ryder says as he drags Avery with him. "Where did you get a gun?!"


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Tessa eyes fluttered open and she killed landing right where the sun dont shine. He fell to the ground and Tessa flipped landing on her back. She smiled at least she didnt lose and her eyes closed again.


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She smirks.

"Where do you think?"she said anoyed...


message 35: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 26, 2012 12:09PM) (new)

"I dont know and I dont want to know." Ryder could see ahead of them that Dylan had gone down and Tessa was lying next to him. "See. We can catch up."


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Tessa chest was barley rising. With the amount of bloodloss it was a miricle.


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She sighed, and poked Tessa.
"tessa,c'mon you are there I klnow you can hear me"she put her hand on her chest and pumped, her hands were filled with blood.


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Tessa's eyes fluttered at her voice but they never stayed open


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She carried her in her arms and ran...
"We have to get her to the hospital!"she said.


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Ryder kicked Dylan in the head, making sure he was out cold, before crouching down next to Avery and Tessa. "She's loosing too much blood. That won't help unless she stops bleeding." Ryder peeled off his jacket and sweatshirt and tee shirt. He shivered and pulled back on his sweatshirt and jacket. He pressed his shirt against the biggest cut.


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Ryder pulled out his phone. "911." He said. "It's faster."


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he was so thin, so attractive....was she falling for him?

"Uhh.."she said.


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"ahhh my phone" she ran back into the rain and grabbed it.
"My iphone!"she complained.


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A note stuck out of Dylans pocket. it almost didnt belong


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He rolled his eyes and said gently, "I'll carry her. Take my phone. Figure out why street we're closest to. Tell them and she'll be in the ambulance in 5 minutes."


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She grabed it and put it up her ear.
'How fast can you get to the New Year Park?"she asked.
"uhuh...ok that close enough......."Yes, yes 5 minutes.."


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(( gtg !))


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Tessa mummbled her eyes fluttering open "is he gone?" Her voice was weak up steady


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(( :( okay.))

Ryder nodded and they stood for a few minutes, waiting for the ambulance. He heard the sirens and sighed. Tessa was dead weight and heavy. Ryder still felt her chest rise and fall. She was alive... For now. Soon the ambulance pulled up and they took over. Ryder stepped back after he had handed Tessa off, next to Avery.


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"That was.."she walked and slipped.


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