A Place Called Dreams discussion

Hiii, My name is Shahira. I love writing and I'll admit that my writing isn't the greatest but I would love some feedback:)

This is a poem I wrote just recently.

Impossible

Impossible

Shatter

Will you catch my teardrops

In my dreams

Sounds really interesting! I love poetry though :)

Just read your poems! They're really good :D

Thanks! I have a cursed block atm but I'm planning to write more.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This poem was dedicated to my best friend when she was leaving.

It's really nice! I loved it though and it's really sweet! Your best friend must have loved it! :)

Thanks! Yeah she did, she was crying by the end:)

Shahira wrote: "Thanks! Yeah she did, she was crying by the end:)"

That's really nice and awww! :)

Something I wrote when bored

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

It's really good! :D

Really? Thanks!

Something I wrote in a really terrible mood

Mask of feelings

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Shahira wrote: "Really? Thanks!"

yea it is really good! :)

Fixed:)

Great :)

Don't forget to fix your reply as well, Chloe!

Shyra! You're awesome! :D

aww, thanks Numey:)

An Islamic poem I wrote

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

The Past


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

'The Past' was really good. Can I ask you something? How do you create that ambience with your story? I would very much like to know since I don't really write poetry but it's interesting how some one can overlook a story and somehow change the effects of that story into what we call; poetry. (BTW how did you get that copyright sign?)