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message 1: by Mia, Second Star to the Right and Straight on Till Morning (new)

Mia (slapthatbih) | 1846 comments Mod
A huge mountain that is right in the middle of Neverland. When a child is on top of Neverpeak Mountain, he or she can see over anyone and anything and can see beyond belief.


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Tessa started useing low branches to swing to the top of the mountain.


message 3: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood followed, using a similar technique. Except he kept falling, slipping and tripping, his black eye not letting him see as right.
"Wait up" he called to Tessa.


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Tessa held onto a branch, and waited "Maybe you should go in front At."


message 5: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
"No" Atwood panted, catching up.
"No... I'm fine. You go ahead" he grabbed on to a branch to catch his breath.


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Tessa went behind him "You need more help then me At." She glanced at her shoulder. It was still stiched up.


message 7: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood stopped breathing heavily.
He pointed ahead.
"You. Go. Now" he swallowed.
"Please?"


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Tessa rolled her eyes but went ahead of him.


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PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood climbed along with her. The steeper it was, the weaker the branches. Atwood almost fell off a couple of those. But he wasn't known for falling off of trees. Not at all.


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Tessa jumped from branches and stopped at a leadge and sat down waiting.


message 11: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood took a deep breath. He caught up to Tessa. He sat next to her.
"It's my eye's fault" he said, seeming embarrassed.


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"I told you to go ahead of me." Tessa said said looking at him and shrugging the backpack off.


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PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
"Who would have caught you if you fell?" Atwood breathed, shaking his backpack off as well.


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"A tree." Tessa said looking at him. "And I would have dived after you if you started falling."


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Atwood sighed shaking his head.
"Well... never mind" he said quietly. He looked down at Neverland quietly.


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Tessa looked up instead. "Would you like to stay here or keep climbing?"


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PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood shook his head.
"Let's keep climbing" he said quietly, standing up.


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Tessa put the bag on again with a wince. She pointed for him to start climbing first.


message 19: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
(( Back! Shower... ))
Atwood sighed. He shook his head.
"I'm fine Tess" he gave her a kind smile.


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((Ok))

"Go." She said pointing.


message 21: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (last edited Aug 09, 2012 05:06PM) (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood took a step closer. He tried to do what she tried earlier: look really cute. He gave her a sweet and honest smile.
"Tess... trust me, please" he said quietly, taking another step closer.


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Tessa sighed and looked up at him. "Be happy I love you." She said before she started climbing again.


message 23: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood smiled to himself.
"I am..." he said, climbing after her.


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Tessa loooked down with a smile and stuck her tounge out.


message 25: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

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Atwood grinned and went cross eyed, not knowing what else to do.


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Tessa laughed and kept climbing.


message 27: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood smiled and shouldered his bag. He continued to climb. Then he spotted a tree around their path. It was huge and strong looking. But Atwood's eyes, a nature expert's eyes, spotted the tree's flaw. The branches, especially the bottom ones, where a bit hollow. Given, a weak tree. Not very many people would be able to spot that kind of flaw in a tree.
It must have been really old...


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Tessa grabbed a branch of the tree. She swung quickly hearing it crack. She landed on her hands and knees a few feet away. She smiled than started climbing again.


message 29: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (last edited Aug 09, 2012 05:51PM) (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood's heart had skipped a beat. But it was back to normal then.
"Oh yes! Do not swing on that tree again, please?" he said to Tessa.


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"Maybe I will, maybe I won't." Tessa said back.


message 31: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
"You'll fall on your bum, slide away and die" Atwood said, taking her hand and looking into her eyes with his pale grey ones.


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"No." Tessa said "I'd grab a tree." And with that she started climbing again.


message 33: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (last edited Aug 09, 2012 06:17PM) (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood watched her closely and carefully.
He continued climbing behind her.
Then they reached the top. He dropped his bag and took a deep breath. The view was even better than the one from that tree Atwood usually went to, to be alone.


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Tessa smiled and looked over Neverland. You could see all that and more.


message 35: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

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Atwood sat down and pulled a bottle of water from his bag. He handed it to Tessa.
"Go ahead and take a drink" he smiled.


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Tessa shook her head smiling. She wasn't even paying attention to him.


message 37: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (last edited Aug 09, 2012 06:31PM) (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood put the bottle down. He looked down at Neverland again and took a melancholy deep breath. He was really going to miss views of the place like that...


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Tessa lost her smile hearing him. She wrapped her arms around herself, and looked down but making it look like she's still looking at the veiw.


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PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood glanced Tessa's way.
"Are you cold?" he pulled off his dark jacket, draping it over her shoulders. It was a bit cool, being so high up in a mountain.


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"Humm?" Tessa asked she became lost in thought.


message 41: by Mia, Second Star to the Right and Straight on Till Morning (new)

Mia (slapthatbih) | 1846 comments Mod
((Wait you guys are going back to the main land?))


message 42: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood kissed her cheek.
"Never mind" he smiled, straightening his jacket on her.


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Tessa smiled looking at the jacket. She leaned into him slightly "We did it At."


message 44: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Maricrystal/Century wrote: "((Wait you guys are going back to the main land?))"

(( I dunno... ))

Atwood grinned.
"Yeah... after a couple of these" he held up his scratched up hands.
"But we did..."


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Maricrystal/Century wrote: "((Wait you guys are going back to the main land?))"

((*shruggs*))

Tessa smiled wider. "You didn't have to come."


message 46: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
"I like adventures" Atwood shrugged, looking down at Neverland again.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

"You don't like leaving me alone." Tessa muttered even to quite for him to hear.


message 48: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
Atwood sat down, pulling her down with him.
"Let's take some rest... a long rest" he said, searching for something in his bag.


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Tessa sat next to him lost thought.


message 50: by PlatonicFern, I BELIEVE I CAN FLY!!! (new)

PlatonicFern (platonicfern473) | 4563 comments Mod
"You seem... I dunno. Are you okay?" Atwood took her hand in his.


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