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message 1: by Cameron (new)

Cameron Goodman (camalya) | 19 comments She walked into class late as usual. But no one ever noticed. She usually came in through the window which was at the back of the class. My school was like four stories high and I was on the top level. I was different from everyone else.


message 2: by Renee (new)

Renee (bigcookiedog) | 22 comments But that didn't mean that she noticed. Melissa sat in her seat, her own little world consuming her as usual. I watched her.


message 3: by Cameron (new)

Cameron Goodman (camalya) | 19 comments I couldn't help but daydream. "Raven the rich and the wondrous. The fun and amazing. The talented and gifed Raven'- "Raven Elissa PAY ATTENTION!" Mrs. Tiney shouts. "Sorry" I barely say above a whisper. How did she even see me. I need some blood.


message 4: by Mikaela (new)

Mikaela (mikaela1) I was so starved, I needed blood right away or I would die. I was so hungry, the blood dripping from your lips is the best feeling, the surge of lost life on your lips, my knee jerked out. Control, Raven keep control. Mrs Tiney noticed, "Do you need to go outside Raven?" She asked rather sternly. I rasped out "Yes" and all but ran to the door. Once outside I breathed a sigh of satisfaction, there near the wall, pinning up posters on the notice board was Mrs Bhorts, the office lady. I lunged at her. A second was all it took for her to die, no scream, no noise, just pure ecstasy for me. Her body was limp in my arms as i drained her of blood. I dropped her to the floor and kicked her aside. "Oh". I whipped around and there was Melissa,backed against the wall, a look of terror on her face. She had seen. I stood and cocked my head to the side and bared my teeth.
"I won't tell," she said, the colour draining from her face. "Sorry, Mel but-" I jumped on her and ripped a chunk of her neck out with my teeth and ate it. I continued to drink her blood until she was lifeless.


message 5: by Cameron (last edited Aug 24, 2012 07:02PM) (new)

Cameron Goodman (camalya) | 19 comments I dropped Melissa on the ground and stared at her lifeless body. I sort of felt bad but knew I shouldn't people from where I'm from kill people with out a backwards glance. I went to Mrs. Bhorts body "I've never liked you" I picked her up her dead weight no match for my strength. I put her over my shoulder then I went to Melissa body and put her over my other shoulder. Then I started to sprint with unnatural speed towards my car. Then a person came into my range of vision. I stopped fast and dropped the bodies in a nearby closet just as a guy walked into me. He was texting someone "Oh, I'm so"- he was cut off when he finally looked up at me. His mouth sort of went into an odd curious line. His eyes started to fill with intrest and curiousity. "Sorry I wasn't looking where I was going" He looked seventeen like me his eyes were green his skin was tan. He was all muscle but you could tell he was a smart kind of jock. He was wearing a dark blue sweatshirt and blue jeans. He had an advanced Chemistry textbook in one hand and a phone in the other. He was in my chemistry class and I knew only the very smart people were in that class. He was very hot indeed but I need to go and get rid of those bodies. "Um, yeah okay...I gotta go" and I was just about to turn and leave when he suddenly grabbed my arm turned me around and backed me up against a wall. "Seriously, I am sorry" he pause and hesitated "I'm Trevor" he says while holding out his hand. I don't know why I shake his hand or look at him in the eye when I could just push him aside. But suddenly I felt soft and warm inside a feeling undescrible a feeling I've never felt before. "I'm Raven, nice meet you" I say in my most calmest voice I could bear. He smiled at me "I'll see you around" he says with a sneaky smile on his face that made me kind of nervous. "Yeah see you" I whisper to him as he walks away. I know he didn't hear me but it was just one of those moments I guess.


message 6: by Mikaela (new)

Mikaela (mikaela1) Raven walked towards the forest and hid behind a tall tree and watched this boy called Trevor. She followed his exact movements and was overwhelmed by how fluid and ethereal his motions were. Raven followed him keeping a safe distance from him and followed him up the road on foot keeping up with his Green Jeep Wrangler. That night Raven sat in a tree overlooking Trevors house, plotting how to kill him and how to make it more entertaing for herself, but there was something about Trevor that was captivating and a familiarity in his actions that Raven couldn't quite put her finger on...She watched Trevor step into his room and she leaned closer, he flicked on his lamp and the light bounced of his teeth and into Ravens eye, she hissed and arched her back slightly, leaning away from the light. She looked closer, his tooth was not a tooth but, in fact a fang. And the realisation dawned on her, Trevor is a vampire.


message 7: by Cameron (new)

Cameron Goodman (camalya) | 19 comments I couldn't believe my eyes I almost lost my foothold in the tree. Oh no wonder we had a connection back in that hallway. I was suddenly very tempted to go to him to find out about his story. Then almost at once his eyes shot straight at me. I froze instantly. I wasn't sure if he could see me or not but either other way my cheeks became warmer and flushed. I saw him smile and knew he saw me. He used one finger and pointed to the spot that stood in front of him. I scrambled down the tree and decided wheather I should go to him or not and even though I had this weird feeling spreading throughout my body I decided to climb up his gutter like a spider and once his window was put up I climbed in. "So you know my secret I see" he says flashing his fangs in his smile. "It's really too bad I have to kill you" he says shortly after then without warning he tackles me to the ground. He was like just about to bite when I kicked him off me and got to my feet relentless. I look at him my eyes threatning to glint red my fangs burning to be let loose but I held back. He looks at me through narrowed eyes. He then lunges at me but I move so quickly and soundlessly and at ease it was kinda funny. I blink once and I realize that I'm on the floor. I was dodging all of his hits and before I knew what I was doing my eyes glinted red and suddenly the tip of my fangs started to pop out but I sucked them fast. I grab his chest and I throw him backwards hard so I was on top and I pinned him there. "I can keep your secret" I yelled at him. He threw me hard on the wall which happened to be onto top of his bed. I lay there for a second feeling the pain. He came up to me pulled me up by my hair. He slammed me up against the wall a whole bunch of times then threw me across the room I hit his mirror which broke at once. I fell on his dresser then I fell onto the floor with a loud crack. The pain searing at the back of my mind. I stood up my body full of broken bones but I didn't even notice I've had it. I hissed at him and the fangs slid from my mouth at once.


message 8: by Mikaela (new)

Mikaela (mikaela1) I snarled at him "You are gonna pay for that,". I licked my fangs and smiled at him ferociously. I faked a lunge forward and instead jumped up and landed half on top of Trevor and half in front. I had my hands on his head, wrestling him to the ground. I wrapped my legs around him trying to use my weight against him but he charged me into a wall, my head it first and red hot pain went searing through my skull. My hands found their way to his neck and i started squeezing his throat, slowly at first then with force, i could hear him choking out the words "stop" but i ignored him until my hands could no longer squeeze his neck. I chucked him to the floor and made my across the room and to the window at lightning speed. I swung my leg out of the window getting ready to jump and looked back at him, he was slowly pulling himself of the floor and coughing out blood. He looked up at him with a look of confusion and worry. I smiled menacingly then blew him a kiss and jumped down.


message 9: by Cameron (last edited Sep 15, 2012 12:12PM) (new)

Cameron Goodman (camalya) | 19 comments I am never doing that again. That's when I started to limp and feel the pain. "Aww man that stupid idiot" I mutter to myself. I started to run limp back towards my home. After about 15 minutes I was almost to my house when I tripped over this rock and fell on my face. I gave up after that. I crawled over to a sidewalk and looked at all of my cuts. My wrist was sprained the back of my head was bleedind...a lot. And my left leg was fractured while the right ankle was broken I'm pretty sure my nose is broken. "Heal right now" I demand in a strained sort of voice. At once I felt the never ending stream of blood stop the blood coming back into the wound. I felt it cleanse itself when it went back. The headache went away completely as the bruises I had all over me disappeared. My wrist's bone straightned out and I actually saw its bone straight up a bit. As for my leg I felt the blood and the bones fix itself. I got up and started limping home until my ankle healed and I started running again. I climbed up a gutter and stepped into my brothers room.
"You're in so much trouble" he says in an easy voice while reading a magazine. He didn't even looked up when I sat in front of him on his bed.
"Why? What's wrong" I say worried. My parents were stricted if they caught me out with out thier permission one more time I was living on the street for a month...which is bad because of the sunlight. Danny shrugged.
"Nothing yet but...my lips could just slip"- he says cut off by me.
"What do you want?" I ask harshly. He finally looks up from his magazine and looks up at me with his deep red eyes. He always made me tremble when he did that but as usual I caught myself. "There is a girl I want over. She's like us and her family..." He looked at me seriously the grin slash smirk disapperaring from his face. "I want mom and dad to meet her" he says.
"What's this got to do with me?" I spit at him while crossing my arms over my chest.
"Two things...I need you to convince mom and dad and I need you to SHUT-UP WHILE THEY'RE HERE" he yells.
"Wait a minute why do I have to shut-up? I ask.
"Hmm...I don't know maybe because the last time I had a girl over you argued with her the entire time then you spilled all of our raw steak all over her. She was covered in blood so we all started licking her like a lolipop except you who was grinning like you won an award!" he shouts at me.
"Well that was kind of unfair she's always hated me for no reason if anyone has the problem it's her" I say while standing up.
"Yeah and sense she's moved out of the country I guess you don't have to worry about it" he spits at me. I clench my teeth together my eyes flashing dangerously at my brother he flinched at the sight of me. I let out a breath I got into his face.
"Blackmail me one more time and my hands might slip to your neck and snap it...YOU UNDERSTAND!" I yell furiously at him.


message 10: by Casey (last edited Apr 03, 2013 01:48PM) (new)

Casey | 1 comments Danny looked at me and gave a cold smile saying "do we have a deal?" I figured that the girl would probably end up dead anyway so I shrugged and said, "as long as Mom and Dad don't find out about me being out,yes." It wasn't that I WANTED him to kill the girl but I figured that it would keep me from the discomfort of exile into the sunshine.I exited the room and went to my bedroom to find Mother and Father sitting on my bed, waiting. Father was the first one to speak "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?" he said, his icy words biting into me. I realized that the only way I would not end up frying was if I had had a valid reason. I saw my opportunity to take care of two problems at once. "I was tracking this boy that approached me today, I believe that he and his coven are trying to move in on our hunting ground."


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