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Sounds fantastic!! i must get writing then :)(my writing plans on holiday were fruitless, as i was unable to get anything done. Hopefully now that i am back online things will pick up once more)
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A few pictures for inspiration. These all come from Deviantart/tumblr (not mine!) and should get your imagination flowing: (CLICK on the picture for a larger image)
http://werekat12.deviantart.com/
Those are all very beautiful! I love them:) Time to start brainstorming!
Can we suggest a title? So that something will pop into their minds?
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Yeah, sure!! This is a free-thinking space, peoples - you can post anything you want here that will help, inspire or instruct you/anyone else in story/creative writing!!
Yay! Here's a couple:Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call
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Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call"
Shadow's Step sounds intriguing - nice choices!!
Thank you...=)
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The first one - with the dragons - is amazing! The second one has awesome markings on the dragon's foreheads, which made me think they could belong to some sort of group of dragon lords/riders/other and the final one - with the guy with the sword on the back of the dark dragon - was epic too!
Thanks, Booknut=)
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Booknut wrote: "Here's some more inspiration...the quote especially just made my day - I'm in love with it!!(click for larger image)"
That's a beautiful quote, Booknut:')
Dragon call and also the shadow's aprentice sounds intreguing...great titles!
Lucinda wrote: "Dragon call and also the shadow's aprentice sounds intreguing...great titles!"Thank you, Lucinda=)
Althea wrote: "http://www.google.com.ph/imgres?hl=fi......"wow...looks amazing. I could imagine it to be similar to something from the TV series 'Once Upon A Time'?! x
Lucinda wrote: "Althea wrote: "http://www.google.com.ph/imgres?hl=fi......"Maybe...I just got it in google...
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Demons run when a good man goes to war
Night will fall and drown the sun
When a good man goes to war
Friendship dies and true love lies
Night will fall and the dark will rise
When a good man goes to war
Demons run, but count the cost
The battle's won, but the child is lost
- From Doctor Who
the evil thing is a gruesome beast
on living flesh it loves to feast
it's a two headed thing
whom you don't wish to greet
one head sucks you blood
one head chews your meat
it carries it's babies
in slimy eggs on it's back
the babies are hungry
when they hatch for a snack
so the evil thing traps
some poor victim alive
for the babies to eat
when their birthdays arrive
but don't worry don't cry
please don't have a fit
the evil thing is not real
unless you think about it
remember don't think about
- From The Haunting Hour, Don't think about it
I hope these kind of quotes help anyone out there to come up with ideas.
Althea wrote: "Yay! Here's a couple:Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call"
OHH! Those are all really good titles:)
Olivia wrote: "Althea wrote: "Yay! Here's a couple:Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call"
OHH! Those are all reall..."
Thanks=)
Booknut wrote: "Uploaded with ImageShack.us
(Found it on Deviantart and thought it was awesome!)"
Whoa.
Booknut wrote: "Uploaded with ImageShack.us
(Found it on Deviantart and thought it was awesome!)"
Beautiful and amazing:)
Althea wrote: "Yay! Here's a couple:Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call"
Those are awesome!! I especially liked The Hidden Locket gives me some ideas....
Booknut wrote: "Here's some more inspiration...the quote especially just made my day - I'm in love with it!!That is so incredibly beautiful! Thanks for sharing booknut!
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Althea wrote: "http://www.google.com.ph/imgres?hl=fi......"So cool!!!! That's sorta how I imagined the scenes from The Iron Fey series when they would traveled between the worlds!
...here is a short story that i have recently written based on Fantasy genre...
“My Lady Eruñtá I bid ye welcome to the realm of Heraya”
As Eanór bowed before me with one arm folded across his chest, his hand lightly resting across his heart I breathed a sigh of relief that I was now safely home. My perilous voyage across the lands of the dark Lord had not been easy, with his fearsome warriors and deadly servants the Carbek chasing me down to Kill. Even the ancient power of my Elvish kind could not protect me from the dangers of the evil that was now spreading throughout the land, as I clutched desperately onto any hope that was now dissolving rapidly. The West tower loomed before me as I stood under its shadow, waiting for the annual meeting of the four seasons and the coming of the chosen one.
Leaving the presence of my master I swiftly made haste to the Forenost antechamber that was situated at the very top of the impressive stone tower, whose structure was concealed by the forest’s dense foliage and canopy except for its spire that reached up to the heavens getting lost within the clouds. It seemed to take hours to reach the top as I silently climbed up the cold, spiral stone staircase that intermittently was penetrated by light streaming in from tiny windows etched into the fabric of the building’s foundations. Flickering flames illuminated the vast empty space that echoed as I entered the chamber, with dark shadows creeping along the floor watching all that moved. All was deathly silent until out of the corner of my eye I noticed the figure of a man making his way under one of the stone pillars towards the golden throne, at the far end of the hall that was placed on a marble plinth. With a tilting of the head he summoned me to him and as I bowed before the great King of the West, I glanced into his eyes and saw the sorrow and grief that was there.
“My Lord Farahír I have come to take counsel with yourself and the other representatives of all races, to speak on behalf of my kin. These are dark times and the growing power cannot be destroyed by the Elves alone of this you know, hence it is time to act.”
Raising his hand I stood before the most powerful ruler in all the five kingdoms, who was now under threat by such strong dark forces that he had finally decided to call for aid. Before another word was spoken between us all manner of Men, Elves and other races flooded into the stone hall, filling the space with sound and movement as five men positioned themselves either side of King Farahír standing to attention. They were the representatives of the land to the North called Hurár, the South being Noldor, the East being Vulda, the Bleak mountains of Shenra and the coastal region of Lorna. As I patiently waited for the sounding of the gong and for the chosen one to make their appearance, I looked out of an immense window behind the King’s throne and looked South over the forest of Fenhura, which was covered in a misty fog so intense that it dimmed all brilliance from the sunlight.
“DONG…DONG…DONG”
A guard clad in metal plates of armor and heavy chain mail the weight of led, threw all his weight behind a wooden mallet that smashed against a gigantic gong located at the back of Forenost hall. Its sound vibrated against the solid walls bouncing off and echoing throughout the land, thus heralding the coming of change and an event in time that would not be repeated. Pushing through the melee an old, grey bearded warlock concealed beneath an abundance of worn aged cloth and cloak that trailed behind him, came forwards to the front and stood facing the king. His expression was unreadable but the King knew not to question him, as those individuals who possessed magic were untouchable and in many ways more dangerous than any fighting warrior. Spinning around abruptly to face the onlookers after bowing his head to the Lord Farahír, I noticed a tiny crease at the side of his mouth and the slight indication of a smile before he began to speak.
“Friends from different regions and allies from the five Kingdoms; Elves, Men, Dwarves, Shades and Sorcerers you have all been called here to put an end to the build up of evil and bring peace to this land. We have never known such iniquity from one being who now threatens are entire existence, all because of his greed and thirst for power and domination...it is time to now act.”
The King stood up from his throne swiftly and joined those other men who were standing still like statues flanked either side of him, waiting for the call to go to war. After Odetu had made his speech he stood to one side now facing the King who ultimately would decide the fate of the Land of Ventar and all those that resided within its boundary. There was utter silence throughout the great hall as no one dared to breathe, as they like myself waited for that deciding and final verdict. Glancing sideways I studied the face of the powerful, mystifying warlock Odetu who was aloof and yet ever present when the time came for imperative events such as this. Looking into those faces before him and seeing anxiety, fear and concern the King nodded to himself as if he had now made his choice.
“Even though together we could be a mighty force against the Dark Lord’s evil, with such warriors as to crush him physically I do feel that it would be the wrong course of action to take…I have therefore decided that as the chosen one to come forward was indeed a creature of magic, that we should use magic to defeat this great threatening power. If we did not use magic then we could crush his body but not his spirit, which contains such potency as to live on forever casting a shadow over all our lives…never sleeping nor resting, but an ever present threat. No, we must invoke an enchantment that will stop the impending cataclysm with a strong magic produced by the chosen one.”
There was a pause as the King and all the knights of the Heldáré turned to face Odetu who was standing leaning against one of the stone pillars, looking frail and weak. The thought of the Dark Lord being challenged by such a person was a surreal notion, and one that many would not agree with. The steel blade and axe and iron fist were looked upon in favor always when one was standing before their deadly opponent, as magic was almost forgotten in times such as this. But I then turned to the King and nodded my approval of his logic which showed his inner qualities that were based around honesty and practicality, rather than just bloodlust for revenge. The Dark Lord Zulgaré would endure the wrath of the free peoples of this land, but in a way that he would not expect and for this reason hope seemed kindle. Making my way over to Odetu I gave him my arm to lean on so that I could take him to my master Eanór before the rising of the sun, which would be the time that all spells could not be made.
“Come, we must make haste”
A group of Elves draped in flowing fabrics of striking emerald followed myself and the warlock to the golden fountain, where the Lord Eanór and the Witch Queen Saldaréa were waiting. I gasped suddenly as I became aware of the presence of the Witch whose crystal pearl white eyes shone in the sunlight, which when she gazed upon me felt like she was seeing right into my very soul where I could hide nothing. Picking up a silver goblet and placing it under the flowing water; she glided towards Odetu and bowed so low as to rest the goblet by his feet. All eyes then turned to my master and the leader of the race of the Elves, who was standing so serenely beside the trickling water as a pure being of good heart.
“It is time to use your magic Warlock and save all those that dwell within this land to its fate. By doing so you will have to make the ultimate sacrifice, for those that reside within the five Kingdoms and for the people both Men, Elves, Dwarves and magical beings…may the evil be vanquished and peace restored to this land once more.”
I stood tense hardly able to breathe as the old, wise man lifted up the tarnished goblet of water and spoke several words under his breath. Then silence fell and the sky darkened, as time seemed to freeze whilst a wind picked up and grew in strength. With the gale force wind blowing hard the earth surrounding me seemed to rumble and shake, now under a completely overcast sky that had turned from day into night. Then all was still as the sky cleared and became clear, bright blue once more that welcomed a long-awaited peaceful tranquility. Odetu lay on the leafy ground with his eyes closed as if sleeping, whilst in the realm of Utar the Dark Lord Zulgaré felt his power beginning to drain away from him. It was in this moment that I understood both the evil in magic as well as the goodness that it brings, and how it could alter and define the course of the future for all.
...hope you enjoyed it & would love any feedback. x
Lucinda wrote: "...here is a short story that i have recently written based on Fantasy genre...
“My Lady Eruñtá I bid ye welcome to the realm of Heraya”
As Eanór bowed before me with one arm folded across..."
That was fantastic! I really enjoyed it:) You had me from the first to last word!
Lucinda wrote: "...here is a short story that i have recently written based on Fantasy genre...
“My Lady Eruñtá I bid ye welcome to the realm of Heraya”
As Eanór bowed before me with one arm folded across..."
That was amazing Lucinda!!! Please please continue!
Anna, Thank you. I am not sure how to continue??!! In another group one was asked to write a short story 100-1500 words in the fantasy genre, hence i wrote the above.
...I suppose that once i have (or am given a simple idea) then i run with it, but the key is to have the good idea in the first place.
Lucinda wrote: "Thanks Olivia :) x"You are quite welcome:)
Lucinda wrote: "Anna, Thank you. I am not sure how to continue??!! In another group one was asked to write a short story 100-1500 words in the fantasy genre, hence i wrote the above.
...I suppose that once i h..."
You're very welcome!! I'm not sure exactly how..but I trust that you will!!! You're a fantastic writer! And I understand having idea, but not quite sure how to write it.. *sigh*
Thank you Anna. When one hears comments like yours i feel more determined than ever, as everyone can have self doubts.
Lucinda wrote: "...here is a short story that i have recently written based on Fantasy genre...
“My Lady Eruñtá I bid ye welcome to the realm of Heraya”
As Eanór bowed before me with one arm folded across..."
That's simply amazing! You're an amazing writer and the story was magical. I want to read more...
Anna wrote: "Althea wrote: "Yay! Here's a couple:Tiger's call
The Shadow's Apprentice
The hidden locket
River Moon
Shadow's Step
The magician's notebook
The tiger's claw
Dragon Call"
Those are awesome!! I es..."
Thank you, Anna: )
Lucinda wrote: "Thank you Anna. When one hears comments like yours i feel more determined than ever, as everyone can have self doubts."
You're welcome! I spoke nothing but the truth :)
Anna wrote: "Lucinda wrote: "Thank you Anna. When one hears comments like yours i feel more determined than ever, as everyone can have self doubts."
You're welcome! I spoke nothing but the truth :)"
True!
More titles:Airborne
The night shifter
Starlight
The wizard's last hope
Magic
*any help would be greatly apreciated* Lacking ideas and inspiration.
Any images, fantasy writing thoughts/ words etc. would be most helpful. My mind is so fixed on writing something good that i am blocked, hence all i have managed to do is write pages of stuff that you would find in a fantasy novel but unable to do anything with it!
Thanks x
This one hasn't been active in a while. Anyway, here's my poem.
Winter is coming!
I fervently warned them
Nobody listened
The silence was broken
Eyes were drawn
Rapturously focused on the Core;
I cursed,
Stamping my feet on the floor
Cold seeped through my bones,
Of a kind never known before
My urgent voice echoed round the room
It rose to a screech, but still nobody saw
Never saw the dark fall
Gently descending
Nobody noticed at all.
Leyah wrote: "This one hasn't been active in a while. Anyway, here's my poem.
Winter is coming!
I fervently warned them
Nobody listened
The silence was broken
Eyes were drawn
Rapturously focused on the Core;
..."
Yes, yes it hasn't...Awesome poem by the way!
Thanks, Althea! (Did you notice that it's more than one kind of poem?)Oh - and I get to critique a book! Imagine reading the first chapter of the first draft and getting to help make it better!! :D :D
Welcome:)
Stolen wordsTrapped within my body, I barely have control,
My voice that was my power, the evil world just stole.
I can hear the words around me, tossed around like cheap red balls,
A lone phrase is forgotten, to the dirty floor it falls.
My eyebrows scrunch, I need to speak, but my mouth has long been broken,
The decaying thoughts sit on my tongue, waiting, but never spoken.
I want to make the difference, and really speak my mind,
But with the people that surround me, how could anyone be kind?
I try again to speak aloud, a need to voice my thoughts,
But no one listens when I do, so in the air it rots.
Why does no one understand me, and the pain I'm going through,
Even my friends don't fully get it, so they ignore me too.
It's not that I'm just quiet, with nothing important enough to say,
I'm just waiting for the moment, the darkness of the day.
That's when I will break out of it, my shy and silent shell,
Until then, in my spinning mind, I will never cease to yell.
Any comments or suggestions are appreciated..
Before we begin:
1.) The person's ideas and work are their own. Please be sensitive in how you comment and also respect that it is kinda copyright. Don't take their ideas without asking permission first!!
2.) Open to ANYONE regardless of your perceived talents - even if you've never written a story before, come along and learn new techniques and share ideas and inspiration.
I will be posting up regular:
- tips
- inspiration (pictures, stories or quotes)
- shorts of my own
in order to get this 'machine' moving!
A big thanks to Isabelle for giving this idea life in her suggestion! To give your own suggestions go here for the club suggestion box: http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/9...