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*gives thumbs up* Good job~! ^^
Haha... This story scares me. It just gets worse from what I've written so far... Stashed away... Wahh~~
XDD That's alright....you can check out my stuff if you like ;)
Here's a short thingof another story stashed away where no one can see it~!7 Days... 7 Days... That's all the phone whispered, and then hung up. It was scary. The girl didn't tell anyone. She was too scared. After 7 days, they found her body laying next to a lake in a forest, and she was dead. It's happened to others. With their body next to a lake, the same forest. Mysterious phone calls of the same person whispering "7 days". And strange text messages. You could be the next. The next of the "7 Days" curse.
Haha... It's so stupid. -.- ((I'm a various mood changer. Don't be surprised))
I also typically tend to write stories after some songs, having them similar to the song.. Most people I know said most of them were stupid and weird apparently so I haven't wrote those in a while... T.T
Here's A TRUE opinion of mine, if these are stories you love making, then keep doing it! Don't let any words bring you down!c:But if you want HELP: (view spoiler)
Haha... Hmm..... Maybe I'll start writing those again... But they were so different from everything else... Yet they didnt enjoy it. *sigh* T.T
Oooh, interesting, keep them coming!
The first? I didn't type that one correctly due to the computer I was using that didn't cooperate with me. T.T
I've got an idea... Maybe I'll have it down... I've started it a bit....
Meet Alexandra @ 4:30 P.M. That's all it said on the letter. The tiny letter with a picture of the pawn shop near by. The text messages scared me. This scared me too. So, I headed to the beach to relax and clear my head. It was nice and cool, the fresh breeze pressing against me as I stood on the edge of the cliff. It was perfect. Quiet, nice, and everything that I needed right now. Before someone pushed me off the cliff, having me head-first into the ocean as I caught a small glance behind me as I fell. There was no one there. And then, the ocean drowned me in its waves.
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I was fine. Wet and messed up, but fine. There were people talking to the lifeguard that had taken me out of the ocean. It must've been a while since it all looked fine. I checked my phone briefly for the time. 4:25 P.M. I ran to the pawn shop. There was the same girl, Alyssa from yesterday. Once I had entered, I looked around before asking her, "Is Alexandra here?" Alyssa stared at me in confusion, frowning for a while before laughing, having me confused. "(YN), Alexandra was a doll we used to sell." she laughed getting something from the back. "She "died" when no one began buying it anymore for the other dolls." she Alyssa said making air-quotes in the air. "It was supposed to be sent to someone who came at 4:30 P.M-which I suppose its you-by an annoymous caller." she said handing me the doll. I simply just nodded, walking out of the pawn shop, heading back home. I studied the doll. It had make-up on that was ruined. Black mascara down its face, hair messed up, dust on it a bit, same color of my hair and eyes, and a bit more details. Alyssa had said that this doll had "died" apparently. Weird. The text messages I kept recieving had to do with me dying. There was something familiar about this Alexandra doll before it hit me. The doll looked exactly like me when I had fallen from the cliff and into the ocean. This doll, was me after I had fallen and went down to the ocean. I was this doll. I was going to die.
Um, so yeah.... I get a bit scared writing things like these,-ha-but I'm good with this I guess. I have more but this is just a sample of this one other thing... It's around the middle of the real story. So uh, critic it or whatever. I'll be happy to hear your comments. But don't destroy me. T.T