Nicholas's Friend Comments

M.C. wrote: "“Believe reality is what you were taught was myth.”
― Nicholas A. McGirr, Book One: The Growing Dim Project
My suggestion for edit is: "Perhaps reality as you were taught was myth."
I'm only se..."

The character in my work that said this was not going for grammatically correct. The character however was trying to make a point in the text. Thank you for your feedback, though.

Nicholas.

“Believe reality is what you were taught was myth.”
― Nicholas A. McGirr, Book One: The Growing Dim Project
My suggestion for edit is: "Perhaps reality as you were taught was myth."
I'm only sending this on because I've received so many polls from you and could only fancy taking on one of your quotes.

Thanks for your friendship!

Thanks for looking me up, Nicholas.