JM's Friend Comments

Molly has told me about these before, but i've never 'seen it' personally,
a Troll attacked her latest book Breaking Emily In
It's a masterpiece (even by Molly's standards) of descriptive nastiness.
You'll love it
The asshole gave her one star and left no review.. a completely anonymous Troll.

She needs your review!!! An honest review. (not asking for five stars)
She's currently driving back to Chicago
i jumped onto the ORC book and left poor Emily sit till later.

Can you send me a epub of your book? I need that so i can open it on my tablet. Reading on my pc is a pain in the ass.

Thanks.
John

I'm sorry to hear one of your Patron Saints died today.

Losing Dolly is a Sad event,

Jessie
is something going on???
have i pissed UB off?
He's on the system but hasn't talked to me since Friday
after i posted my 'intro' text on the mod page he went silent.
i figured he was out of town, but he's not
he's on the system but won't answer
What did i do?

tip

two people you want to do your reviews

Sydney has both of them in her friends list they both did reviews on her first book, i told her to friend them so she can ask them in the future.

(they're easier to find in her list, than mine)

Hank and Kymagirl

they are both fair, generous and consistant

Boy,,, do you have a fan....

check the phoenix thread...

N Lacy is one horny dude. LOL

Thank you for the contribution i LIKE it

i opened up another slot...for another slut.

I wish my 'thumb pics were in color

In case you haven't read her books
she only has two
The first one came out about three months ago

I don't know what she does (or did) for a living, but it HAD to be writing something.

She's tooooo fucking good for this to be new,,, but she swears she's never written before (i don't believe that!!!)

Her books will blow your sox into next week

JM wrote: "John wrote: "by the way.
your concept of Alpha and Beta Readers, in addition to ARD readrs

i lost a great writer yesterday, she is erratic, but when her head is on straight, she's awesome.
I tried..."

i understand that (was an editor for tooo long_
That needs to be explained (tactfuly) to Peaches.

She's really good, but eratic and that's why

She's here somewhere

i see her tracks in lots of threads LOL

John wrote: "by the way.
your concept of Alpha and Beta Readers, in addition to ARD readrs

i lost a great writer yesterday, she is erratic, but when her head is on straight, she's awesome.
I tried like hell to..."

An author can't always see what they've written. When you read your own stuff you're actually remembering what you meant to say and not actually seeing the words. You can catch some things, but it's always better to get some fresh eyes on your work. I like suggestions. I may not always agree, but I always consider them.

by the way.
your concept of Alpha and Beta Readers, in addition to ARD readrs

i lost a great writer yesterday, she is erratic, but when her head is on straight, she's awesome.
I tried like hell to let me read her galley's before she submitted them
she had two good stories but made technique mistakes that blew them to hell. they fizzled.

Trying to convice her that what she 'sees' in her head,,, is not making it to the page.. drove me nuts.
Basicallyn she got pissed.

I told her what was wrong with the story,,, and she posted it unchanged, anyway
soooo i put my critique into my review.

if she had used Alpha and Beta readers,.. she would have learned her errors.
they were, to a degree, habitual

This is the review i just finished

I was reading it,, (slow, tedious, one-hand work LOL)

https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

it is the fifth episode

prof,,,, Oral Exam,,,, Office Hours,,,, Faculty,, and now Open House

i see you found the bookshelf

i've been so busy, i'm trying to get my reading done...
sorry

glsd you found it

there';s some folks her that have you in their friend list

Aղցela W. wrote: "Thanks for the friend invite"

Always use more friends

Thanks for the friend invite

I just found your reply (yes) to my request for a copy of Bound

it's been a busy day..
I just got promoted to mod for a group that's been inactive since 2014
I pestered GR admin and they finally replied with a yes.
I'm now the co-moderator (along with a ghost)
for the group Sex, BDSM, and Romance.

needless to say you're invited..
The group has been competely idle for over 12 years.
The guy created the group and then left GR totally.
so no mod.

I do reviews for Molly Pike and Peaches Dean, and last week i got a request from Sydney Collins
I did the review for her new book Seduced in front of my Husband.
that review was fun.

my email is jsch1947#gmail

please send it epub format


I will be glad to review your book. of course, it will make things faster if i read it first.