Sadie's Friend Comments

if you stay with jessie, you will be a prime target for the same issues that hit Erik, and BJ,
you are setting yourself up for a one star troll attack.

the bots are real.
Jessie doesn't want to do the work.
The writers pay the price.

i cheat with my girls

Molly, Peaches and Syd,,,
i'll do the same with you

if i keep the review on my home page (I don't let it scroll off)
it will keep collecting 'likes'.

i like to push them to 20 before i let it disappear.

Your review is up and online

Congratulations
I tried not to incorporate spoilers...
it's really good.

I absolutely LOVE the poker game
it's pure genius and erotic as all hell

join the group (the mod group) and go to conversation

i want to have a private conversation and that's trickier than you realize

go to general conversation in the 'mod' group

it's a secret group and it gives us privacy

lets move this to the 'gather and talk' please

Sadie wrote: "Frank wrote: "Molly wrote a small hucow tale last year.
i thought it was cute...

We didn't know if there would be a market for it (whether it would sell)

she sat on it

this is not small, it's a ..."



I LIKE IT!!!

i'm not finished, i'm a bit over half way thru
She just decided to change to light green. and is spending the night

is this the ONLY book you've written...

lets move this to the chat page.. please

Frank wrote: "Molly wrote a small hucow tale last year.
i thought it was cute...

We didn't know if there would be a market for it (whether it would sell)

she sat on it

this is not small, it's a full novel
i l..."

Hey, sorry I don't ever really see this section as it doesn't show up on my phone at all. Thank you for reading it! It is longer than I was hoping for, but I struggled to cut any more and I feel like it all works for the story. It is great value compared to other stories in the niche.

As of now I just have a couple of people on booksprout reviewing it.

Molly wrote a small hucow tale last year.
i thought it was cute...

We didn't know if there would be a market for it (whether it would sell)

she sat on it

this is not small, it's a full novel
i love it (and i'm not at the hot parts yet) they're bitching about the skirts fitting...

talk to Molly and let her review this (if she has time)
She's really strapped for time...

I'll tell you what you've got..

i find your attitude about military or Govt service fascinating

i put in four years in the Navy and another 27 in Civil Service.

Brooke's attitude is amusing and it's a unique spin on what i would expect to be an erotic story

did anyone in JM's group show interest in reviewing it?

Read the Editorial and the Bot folder before you entrust it to them. One of the reasons JM is no longer a mod here is a difference of opinion about the validity of the bot attack
She doesn't think it's worth the inconvenience of her having to work to remove them. She would rather play games.

i finished the previous book last night and I started on "On Duty; this morning

it's longer than what i'm used to (most erotic tales run around 80-100 pages)
Brooke has a pragmatic attitude (bordering on sarcastic)
the tone is fascinating and realistic
The attitude catches my attention and makes it easy to read.
It draws me in.

I hope you had a good chat with Molly

She's a good friend and i love her, (no we've never met,,, and the age difference, along with a wife who would castrate me with the back of a dull spoon,,,) LOL

She will help, all you have to do is ask.

Warning....
JM Reines was a co-mod here...
She left and cloned the group, and put REAL on the front.

if you look at her personal Group list, you will NOT see the Moderator Support group in it
Molly has it
I have it
Thyaa has it

That indicates membership in the group that is protecting writers from the current bot attacks.
it's not bullshit,,
and it's work that JM doesn't want to do
that's why she left.

read my editorial and the bot thread and it will become clear
if you're a new writer, you need to take heed to that.

JM does not believe in bots.
She WAS a co-mod in my group.
my attempts to remove them annoyed her to the point of ejecting me from the group

she was not the only mod,
one of the others DID contact support and realized the threat to her work (Molly) .
when you stage in insurrection it's wise to get consensus from the other members.
Molly corrected everything and JM then cloned the group and put REAL in front of the name.
But notice, She is NOT a member of the Moderator Support Group they are directing this effort (check her group list)
All the writers in her group are vulnerable to the attacks.

Sadie,,, thanks for the book,,, I’m reading two right now and “hucow is the second one… It’s longer than I expected, I have a shorter one ahead of it

Thank you for thinking of me by giving me the chance to review it

You are new and there’s some things I don’t think you understand
Read my Editorial and then the folder about the bots.. (the last entry is the most current)

The threat is against WRITERS..

When you join a group it’s easy to know if it’s safe from bots
Look at what ‘groups’ the moderators belong to..go to their profile page and scroll down to their ‘group’ que.

You are looking for the Moderator Support Group. Icon.
If it’s in their group que.. they’re members of it and they filter to keep them out.

If they don’t belong,, enter at your own risk

What will happen is you’re new book will get a one star (or now that there’s fractions, it will be extra tiny) and there will be no supporting ‘review’ to justify the attack. The attack is almost always anonymous.

A few days, weeks later, somebody will approach you with a scheme to protect you from future attacks. (for a small investment on your part,.. money, that is)

The only protection we have is to sanitize the group against the bots.
Stay out of bot infested groups if you’re a writer.

If you’re not a writer,, you can do whatever,.. it doesn’t impact you, anyway.

But if you are,.. protect your work and it’s salability.
I post information explaining all this in the discussion page,

I saw your comment about 'favorite trope'. I loved your answer.

MY favorite trope is hard to find...
it's Cuck-queen... in my worlds She's a Switch not a sub.

A cuck queen has a 'bull/hubby. with high stamina/well hung,
She entices her 'friends' to try him on with a promise of 'swinging'.
She loves to watch/torment friends hubby while her's is destroying the friend.
she whisperes in his ear as his wife shatters repeatedly as the queen jacks him off over and over... completly draning him before her bull finishes.
then when bull is finished friends hubby can't get it up to reclaim her.
The 'Queen's job is to supply meat for her bull to slaughter.
She seldom participates beyond rubbing one out. She gets off watching and tormenting husbands turning them into cuckolds.

Another writer i do ARC's for is
Peaches Dean

her latest (my review is attached)



This will give you a pattern for a woman who writes MALE porn with a fucus on Spit roast or DP.
Ms Dean has been following my preachings about avoiding the cuckold formula...
it's simple

put hubby in the room or better yet,,, put him on the other end,

male porn writers seem to avoid spit roast and DP
i've never been able to figure out why

There is hope for you as a writer

Sydney Collins is one of the women i do ARC's for

I just finished reviewing her latest,,, it's a trilogy Hotwife with Rival.

Sydney works full time,, She's married with three kids under 12, and she writes like a seasoned pro
She started with her first book in early May

i am blessed, She likes my reviews and she asked me to read it before it was released.
it blew me away... and every book she's done since has as well.

Her trilogy is a masterpiece








These will grab you
They will also give you an example of the difference between dark PORN and Dark Smut

unfortunately Reverse harem is mostly found in Smut
I WANT TO CHANGE THAT
i much prefer RH to cuckoldry

writers of male porn see to get off on the humiliation in that genre..
i DON'T.

The first thing i read of hers,,,, was two years go

FTB (First Time Blacked) Playdate.

it's short, it's hot, and it will show you her passion about makeing her FMC shatter under the pressure.

If you're serious about writing

Molly is a good person to talk to...

she's young,, an experienced writer...
AND SHE'S GOOD AT IT!!!

Frank wrote: "Thanks for the vote of Friendship😁

I do ARC's for three women writers with very nasty minds

Molly Pike
Peaches Dean and
Sydney Collins

sydney has a trilogy you will find on my profile page

it's..."

Thank you Frank! For the recommendations and the friendship :)

I'd love to send you my first book once I have it completed. Ideally I'll have it finished sometime in late October.

Thanks for the vote of Friendship😁

I do ARC's for three women writers with very nasty minds

Molly Pike
Peaches Dean and
Sydney Collins

sydney has a trilogy you will find on my profile page

it's a very dark hotwife tale and it's magnificent
i love RH but there aren't many in mens porn genre

i want to bridge the gap between porn and smut
i would love to see your work.