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So far, I will applaud the author on his knowledge (more taste in his chosen knowledge) on alternative pop culture in 1995.
But I feel his writing needs work. (This is his first novel) A lot of novels do need more details, but sometimes there are some novels that need less…this one so far although only in the first chapter…needs a little less. I hope it bets more leveled out.