????? I dont remember the writing to be this atrocious in the second book but maybe it’s just my memory.
The plot is ALL OVER THE PLACE !! It’s your debut series, stick to simplicity if you can’t manage a more sophisticated plot, because you can’t. It’s a mess right now… the plot for the trilogy is supposed to be simple and still I have troubles to follow
— Aug 07, 2025 03:24PM
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