this is like the twilight new moon where edward was arguably worse and legit said "This is the skin of a killer, Bella" she still thinks Jacob is worse (for just assuming he kills for no reason)
also the syntax is not cohesive when some times she would be running and then the next sentence she is standing by a wall. Like blocking characters in a relative space is not well dictated
— Aug 16, 2026 01:55PM
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