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Exam0le... tell me when you see the issue.
"No-one is to go anywhere alone; Brent is still around and looking for Sage. Hunter take Jax with you to go to her mothers and be vigilant. We leave in three hours, after lunch. Kai and Mav pack the bags and sort the notes out for the temporary team.” Hunter warns us all."

I know for a fact that this is a good author, so explain to me why this book reads like a watpad book?
So far she has confused details, like her current age, and telling the guys about her tats... I'm close to dnf.

No worries, I am still planning on finishing this book but, I got side tracked by writing my own drama/erotica.. I will catch up with this soon!

I HATE the writing style but, so far, it seems to be a cute story.

So far, I don't like that it is FPOV. These books drive me nuts.
I want to know what everyone is thinking and doing.
I'm giving it a chance tho.

This is not reverse harem. This is a poly. With FF content.
I didn't sign up for this. Some warning would have been nice!

Honestly, I am beginning to lose interest.

Ok, so the whole immature thing was on purpose but it backfired. At least for this reader. It made me absolutely lose faith in this author. Made me HATE her writing. Which is sad. I had enjoyed the beginning but, if she fails this miserably with this series, what hope do we have for her others?

That's it. I fucking HATE.this book!
It is bad enough that I have to deal with the poly with the guys. I don't mind MM content but, I fucking hate when an author labels their book as a reverse harem, when there is another fucking chick involved!
That is a poly trope. Not reverse harem!
Please label the book genre correctly!

Ppl, unless you are an infant stuck in an adult body, I STRONGLY suggest you do not waste your time on this book. It is horribly immature. It doesn't feel like Kelsey wrote it. Does she have children? Did she have a high ghost writer write this book? It is a struggle to get through it. Even my favorite characters have lost their place in my heart. They.went from being badass or sweet to fucking pathetic and annoying.

Ok, so far, this story is immature. I feel like I am reading a child's fairy tale with a side of inappropriate smutt. Sigh. I really LIKED this author but, fairy godmother UNICORN!? Really? Losing interest real fast.

I feel this need to point out, the correct quote is,

"XoXo, gossip girl"

If you know, you know.

I am going to re-read/audiobook this now because.the series.is completed.

Haha omg. The couple doing the audiobook just made me laugh while reading the TWs.

Although I am enjoying this book, I am going 5 take a break from the series.after it because, I know there are at least two more books coming out, and I hate.reading/listening to incomplete series'.

Holy hell!
I'm listening to the audiobook. I'm at part two... Holy shit!

As much as I love Omegaverse, I HATE first person. Loathe it. With a passion.
I will try to get through this book but so far...meh

Reading a new to me author! Wish me luck folks!

I like the idea but it is a very slow read....

I'm reading it but still don't understand the plot. It's actually boring so far.

Halfway thru and honestly, I was expecting so much more...
Actually, it is sorta long and drawn out and boring af. The smutt is slow build and blah... Imo.

Just to be clear. In ANY book I read.from this author... I see the word fork, in any capacity dealing with hair... Automatic loss of two stars!

"He comes back to bed and slides in behind me, wrapping his arm around my waist and pulling me to him so that my back is firmly secured to his back. He kisses my neck and my cheek."

Tell me when you see it....

"It's too early for this much noise," Troy's voice calls from down the hall. A moment later, he appears in the doorway, his T-shirt and boxers so rumpled he makes Mace look ready for a black-tie affair. His dark hair is damp from a shower, and he's wearing a fresh T-shirt and jeans. "

Mace, is only wearing boxers....
So.... How is Troy in both a t-shirt and boxers, as well as t-shirt and jeans?

This book still makes me want to cry at the end.

Honestly, things keep.drawing my attn away from reading this book.
It is somewhat boring. I am struggling to finish it. And I am about half away through it.
The fmc, is too damsel in distress.

I know it is a taboo to judge a book by it's cover but, when the cover are models mention to represent the characters in the book, maybe pay attention to the models used.
The FMC is an AUBURN haired woman... Whereas the woman on the cover is a Blond.I
The guys all match up.
So why the so obvious mistake?
Messes with our heads.
Makes it hard.to picture the characters when you socially screwup the cover models.

So, this is a re-read but, second time around, I have to be honest and say, I am getting so sick and tired of her self-deprecating attitude.
Whine, whine, whine... Everything is MY fault.. I control everyone's choices, Everything is MY fault! Whatever. It gets old!

I really didn't want to end the year with a dnf, but seriously, it isn't engaging. Even that.sister.book I started the year off with with was better than this.

I cannot get into this.book for some reason