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The author has no idea how to use commas, the punctuation is PAINFUL, but I like the pacing and the premise...I have no idea what my rating is going to be tbh

The shitty formatting and clear lack of editor are disengaging me from a story I otherwise would like. And WTF is up with these weird ass chapter choices? She's not only cutting scenes in half to start a new chapter, I'm pretty sure she's cutting PARAGRAPHS in half. Why why won't people save up and hire an editor? Or, fuck, beg a friend to do it. SOMETHING

Brainmeats are saying this is the wrong kind of dark for my current level of not okay

Stalled because adhd

Putting progress because I'm enjoying this (skulduggery! and monsters!) But unmedicated ADHD is a bitch and if I can't finish this I may have to wait until the next time I get gifted (or can afford) KU.

I'm so mad this snobby elitist bitch is going to have a happy ending

Yeaaaaah... it's a no from me

Wtf is with these mixed signals. Also if I didn't know what genre this was is I'd think the ml was a serial killer getting read to target her

"I'm make her see I'm what she needs"?? Jesus Christ yeah that's EXACTLY what a woman running from an abusive marriage needs /s

To be honest this romance is rushed, forced, and kinda unbelievable and I don't just mean in the "I'm not a fan of instalove" kinda way

Ugh. The not like other girls is strong in this one, might negate my love of single parent stories.

Ohhh I think I figured it out. The author using dictation software and not getting an actual editor would explain all of it

Not sure if there's less errors or if there's a pattern to the errors that I've subconsciously gotten used to and compensated for

Oof if anyone edited this they did a bad job. So many misplaced and missing words. Some I can fill in with no problem, others are me just guessing what the author was trying to say. I hope my library didn't have to pay too much for this ebook. Not sure im gonna finish this one

humbug

I've rarely been so annoyed with getting those "it's gonna be a dnf" feels cuz there's a lot to enjoy but this book is just getting on my NERVES

The lack of editing is really starting to get to me.

stained red? I thought their blood was orange?

WHAAAAT THE FRICK CAREFUL OF THE FIRST EDITIONS ASSHOLES

"Her smirked."
HIE THEE TO AN EDITOR there's been a number of indicators that the author didn't, this is just the most egregious

I'm doing an update so I remember that it's exactly as bad as I thought it night be. big old newp.

Sometimes I read someone's review of a book and the questions they ask indicate that they read it but also make me question their reading comprehension. So much so that I almost, ALMOST, want to explain what seems REALLY obvious to me.

a villainous type dispatched that quickly means there's another villain. one per character perchance?

"That was the best climax ever!" is, however, a direct quote. As is the response "Just wait until I fuck you. That will be even better."

"we have to fuck or die" is super romantic (and a paraphrase)

oh my GOD the need for editing is severe.

I just can't

why does she keep going on about "forgetting her feminist ideals"?? ugh. feminism is about equality and women choosing what they want, which means if a woman wants a dominant man THAT'S HER CHOICE

this story has been dragging for me and I thought "maybe it's just establishing world building and will get better once it starts on the relationship". Nope. not so far. idk if I'll be finishing this one.