It is so hard to read.. The way it is written is very off.. As much as Ana bites her lips she should not have a lip left. And everyone is always looking up through their lashes.. And the scene about losing her v-card.. There seems like there are sections missing in some scene. ugh... really trying to make it.. it SO much like the movie you really are not missing much between the two. trying to finish it..
— Mar 15, 2017 08:05PM
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