The whole world-building is underwhelming, to say the least. The pacing at times lethargic. The objectification alarming for anyone who hasn’t read the three other fanfics and, therefore, doesn’t have the context to the inner workings of the protagonist’s mind and heart. AND YET, I LOVE YOU TOVEN HEARST. I DON’T CARE. I LOVE YOU ALREADY YOU PURE-HEARTED ETERNALLY YEARNING HORNY FREAK. I LOVE YOUUUU
— Dec 27, 2025 08:05PM
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