This might turn into a DNF. The hero is 36. Heroine is a 18-year old COLLEGE FRESHMAN. The fantasy of a rich, older man may appeal to younger women, but as someone roughly the same age as the hero, I cannot fathom what would draw him to a fetal adult. She's not old enough to legally drink the wine he keeps pouring down her throat. She carries a backpack and worries about her grades. This is squicky, not sexy.
— Jul 18, 2017 08:10AM
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