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Good so far - although some of the prose can be somewhat cringe and self-indulgent at times...''their wold enfolded my life..as gently and completely as a swollen tide closes over a stone that stands upon its shore''.....really? It seems he tries rather hard to convince the reader how perceptive and philosophical an ex-convict can be he is.

Good so far - although some of the prose can be somewhat cringe and self-indulgent at times...''their wold enfolded my life..as gently and completely as a swollen tide closes over a stone that stands upon its shore''.....really? It seems he tries rather hard to convince the reader how perceptive and philosophical an ex-convict can be he is.